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高压电线上的鸟儿
杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-03-15 06:50:56    Post subject: 高压电线上的鸟儿 Reply with quote

高压电线上的鸟儿

一二三四五六七八
对!一共是八只鸟
落在田野上空的两根高压电线上
一根站着七只
另一根站着一只大的
像是一群在地头歇工的农人
面对收割到一半的庄稼议论纷纷

那一只大的是村长江富
剩下的是村中一些拐弯抹角的穷亲戚

他们正为点七爷收那块地
他老成一棵树了
他们在谈论收成
说卖了粮给点七爷买个好寿材

风正从坡上那片墓碑后转过来
吹落了几片叶子
大地空旷得让人落泪
又有两只鸟飞来落到电钱上
我感觉秋天被撞得颤了几下
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沙漠
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PostPosted: 2007-03-15 07:24:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

风正从坡上那片墓碑后转过来
吹落了几片叶子
大地空旷得让人落泪
又有两只鸟飞来落到电钱上
我感觉秋天被撞得颤了几下

这一节漂亮!
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kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-03-15 10:08:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

风正从坡上那片墓碑后转过来
吹落了几片叶子
大地空旷得让人落泪

《》拜读 问好 ;))


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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-03-15 16:14:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢kokho诗人和沙漠诗人。祝好!!!!!!!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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PostPosted: 2007-03-15 18:11:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

风正从坡上那片墓碑后转过来
吹落了几片叶子
大地空旷得让人落泪
又有两只鸟飞来落到电钱上
我感觉秋天被撞得颤了几下

诗结尾好,出奇
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-03-16 00:14:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢左岸诗人。问好:)
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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