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弹剑作歌
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Posted: 2007-03-13 19:39:42 Post subject: 七律读书有感（限韵、用典）

哪堪岁月被蹉跎，白首犹将铁杵磨。凿壁点明三尺卷，登楼穷尽万层波。人言戊戌何其短，我谓公车不必多。倘若清风难解语，离骚入目又如何！

和平岛
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Posted: 2007-03-13 20:02:18 Post subject:

离骚入目又如何好 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

白水
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Posted: 2007-03-15 11:10:47 Post subject:

高难度的, 拜读了. 顶

秋叶
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Posted: 2007-03-15 11:40:52 Post subject: Re: 七律读书有感（限韵、用典）

好诗，拜读了。和上一首，请斧正。七绝- 和弹剑作歌《读书有感》不为娇颜不为财，读书万卷入衾怀。尔当弹剑非凡响，白首作歌动地来。

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Posted: 2007-03-15 11:42:56 Post subject:

长铗归来兮。这首配弹剑作歌，一个字，好。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

白水
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Posted: 2007-03-15 12:40:40 Post subject:

秋班终于打破古韵无精牌的记录, 把第一枚精牌给弹剑了, 严重嫉妒. 随一首沾点亮吧七绝<弹剑作歌> 轻弹古曲唱蹉跎, 砺剑三尺映月波. 旧作新填离騒赋, 清歌佐酒醉诗魔.

博弈
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Posted: 2007-03-15 17:27:22 Post subject:

哇，ok 凑趣一个嵌名回文（用今韵?) 秋白水叶弹歌作剑上书铗铁笔摹忧去暂归来赋饮岛平枫美北诗磨 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

凤舞九天
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Posted: 2007-03-15 17:28:26 Post subject: Re: 七律读书有感（限韵、用典）

秋叶 wrote:

好诗，拜读了。和上一首，请斧正。

七绝- 和弹剑作歌《读书有感》

不为娇颜不为财，读书万卷入衾怀。
尔当弹剑非凡响，白首作歌动地来。

内容很好，但还不能称为七绝。 Very Happy

秋叶你用的是诗韵吧！平水和新韵里“为”与“颜”皆为平声字。
还有尾句犯了孤平，注意喔。 Cool

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不需刻意求佳境自有奇逢应平生

凤舞九天
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Posted: 2007-03-15 17:35:22 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

秋班终于打破古韵无精牌的记录, 把第一枚精牌给弹剑了, 严重嫉妒. 随一首沾点亮吧 Very Happy

七绝<弹剑作歌>

轻弹古曲唱蹉跎,
砺剑三尺映月波.
旧作新填离騒赋,
清歌佐酒醉诗魔.

白水兄一如既往地豪气干云呀！
Very Happy

可惜尺字騒字出律了。 Sad

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hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-03-15 17:47:29 Post subject:

什么时候我编个程序, 严格按照韵律编排诗词来生产诗歌 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-03-15 18:44:23 Post subject:

凤舞九天 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

秋班终于打破古韵无精牌的记录, 把第一枚精牌给弹剑了, 严重嫉妒. 随一首沾点亮吧 Very Happy

七绝<弹剑作歌>

轻弹古曲唱蹉跎,
砺剑三尺映月波.
旧作新填离騒赋,
清歌佐酒醉诗魔.

白水兄一如既往地豪气干云呀！
Very Happy

可惜尺字騒字出律了。 Sad

知道什么叫一箭(剑)双鵰吗? 专门留给你这临阵脱逃的80万禁军教头的. 这次非打了再交不可. 自古有藏头诗, 可这首藏第二个字, 你要能和出一首藏第四个字的弹剑作歌, 我和唐兄一起请你大餐. (出律一字打平, 因为这尺随时可改, 到是騒字一改要害意 Embarassed

)

等

白水
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Posted: 2007-03-15 18:45:42 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

什么时候我编个程序, 严格按照韵律编排诗词
来生产诗歌
Cool

好啊, 快点....... victory

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-03-15 18:47:58 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

凤舞九天 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

秋班终于打破古韵无精牌的记录, 把第一枚精牌给弹剑了, 严重嫉妒. 随一首沾点亮吧 Very Happy

七绝<弹剑作歌>

轻弹古曲唱蹉跎,
砺剑三尺映月波.
旧作新填离騒赋,
清歌佐酒醉诗魔.

白水兄一如既往地豪气干云呀！
Very Happy

可惜尺字騒字出律了。 Sad

)

白水妹妹挑战凤舞九天兄
这下有好戏看啦

九天兄, 我给你加油鼓掌助威!

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博弈
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Posted: 2007-03-15 18:57:23 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

什么时候我编个程序, 严格按照韵律编排诗词
来生产诗歌
Cool

先写个平仄律 checker, 应该很有用.
我去年想做,没时间.

另一个可以做的是类似
http://dico.isc.cnrs.fr/dico_html/en/index.html
里的Semantic Representation (有空的话,填入个搜旬的英文字,看他的关系图).取同样的概念,建立中文的字词典.这可以运用在对仗上.

这应该是文学研究生的 project, 但一般学文的不会写程式,与学电脑的结合一起,有可能达成. 中文应该要有这样的系统.
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hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-03-15 19:12:29 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

什么时候我编个程序, 严格按照韵律编排诗词
来生产诗歌
Cool

先写个平仄律 checker, 应该很有用.
我去年想做,没时间.

需要对中文文字库有些了解
我会慢慢关注这放面的信息

我是编程的, 但对中文字库了解不多
适当的时候,我们可以合作, 我提供技术服务:

4*5
4*7
两维ARRAY
关键是要有一个中文字库:
每一个字连另一个区分平仄的TABLE, 或者标明平仄的数字(一个字可能同时是平仄)
Very Happy

博弈
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Posted: 2007-03-15 19:22:55 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

博弈 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

什么时候我编个程序, 严格按照韵律编排诗词
来生产诗歌
Cool

先写个平仄律 checker, 应该很有用.
我去年想做,没时间.

need a rule-based engine, rules and lookup tables, the accurate char. database is a major cost of labor, maybe you can get it from some university with some minimal fees. that's partially why i wrote that article in 七律数学模式 last summer.
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Posted: 2007-03-15 19:24:53 Post subject: Re: 七律读书有感（限韵、用典）

弹剑作歌 wrote:

哪堪岁月被蹉跎，白首犹将铁杵磨。
凿壁点明三尺卷，登楼穷尽万层波。
人言戊戌何其短，我谓公车不必多。
倘若清风难解语，离骚入目又如何！

清风不识字，何必乱翻书。好个弹剑作歌，丈夫也！

弹铗仗义夫如何，剑胆琴心砺炼磨；
老骥既怀千里志，岂言岁月成蹉跎？

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-03-15 19:33:24 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

博弈 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

什么时候我编个程序, 严格按照韵律编排诗词
来生产诗歌
Cool

先写个平仄律 checker, 应该很有用.
我去年想做,没时间.

If we spend time, we should be able to find it somewhere,
once we have the database data, then the other parts should be easy

just keep this in mind, we might be able to come cross something some day on the way

白水
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Posted: 2007-03-15 19:41:32 Post subject: Re: 七律读书有感（限韵、用典）

晓松 wrote:

弹剑作歌 wrote:

哪堪岁月被蹉跎，白首犹将铁杵磨。
凿壁点明三尺卷，登楼穷尽万层波。
人言戊戌何其短，我谓公车不必多。
倘若清风难解语，离骚入目又如何！

清风不识字，何必乱翻书。好个弹剑作歌，丈夫也！

弹铗仗义夫如何，剑胆琴心砺炼磨；
老骥既怀千里志，岂言岁月成蹉跎？

晓松, 真棒. 快把你弹剑, 凤午大侠也请出来. 现在枫华论坛挑战北美枫, 你们这些文林高手都不去以诗会友, 就听云老师一人应战, 怎算得诗坛英雄 Very Happy

加油

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-03-15 19:54:42 Post subject:

有请凤舞九天兄和白水兄开场

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