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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:15:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

上声“五律”

小狗也品酒,嘴里有点痒。
怎可古礼懂,只好苦口讲。
胆小恐老虎,体矮喜奖赏。
采取孔府本,指导尔保养。

本牛鲁产,普通话的不行,请老狐狸审阅一下,那个字不是上声。

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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:17:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

狐狸狼狈狠,鹦鹉鹤鸡鸣。
螃蟹蛮虾蛰,驴骡骑马腾。

未对偏旁联,狐狸兄罚打屁屁一板子,先寄下。耶~~~~~~
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嘁!这钓徒抢俺钓渔蓑翁的饭碗,居然帮老牛的忙。看俺来——

森林动物园(旧声新韵)

走马要观花,
盈枝借机夸:
松枫桃李果,
藤蔓藓苔芽。(它们不是动物,所以没有动词)
瞠目矇瞳相,
嗟喉结舌枷。
如何无走兽?
猫逐鼠来啦。(唐伯鼠与唐伯猫都是牛哥)
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:18:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

上声“五律”

小狗也品酒,嘴里有点痒。
怎可古礼懂,只好苦口讲。
胆小恐老虎,体矮喜奖赏。
采取孔府本,指导尔保养。

本牛鲁产,普通话的不行,请老狐狸审阅一下,那个字不是上声。

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啪啪!鼓掌,帅呆了,酷毕了!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:19:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

走马要观花——啧啧啧平平
盈枝借机夸——平平啧平平

啧啧,大拙老师不简单啊!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:20:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

走马要观花——啧啧啧平平
盈枝借机夸——平平啧平平

啧啧,大拙老师不简单啊!

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哈哈,牛哥终于称俺为老师了,俺好好高兴耶,耶~~~~坚决不改,该了就是学生了。耶~~~~~
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:21:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈,牛哥终于称俺为老师了,俺好好高兴耶,耶~~~~坚决不改,该了就是学生了。耶~~~~~

上声“五律”的拿来。耶~~~~~
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:22:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

上声“五律”的拿来。耶~~~~~
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嘁!老师岂能听学生的命令?
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:23:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

螃蟹偷偷潜入江,
老牛无语掩门窗。
明明约好知音客,
突闪恒星难见双。

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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:24:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

螃蟹偷偷潜入江,
老牛无语掩门窗。
明明约好知音客,
突闪恒星难见双。

真圣主明君也。君别片刻,当刮目相看。弘历你这家伙越来越厉害了,罗锅只有叹服。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:26:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

五律.致红叶经霜及老蓑衣二兄,凑个热闹。
  
化外我独孤,不才号钓徒。
佳人修伉俪,醇酒醉醍醐。
江海涌波浪,芽茶荐葭莩。
诚邀两叟至,西域好围炉。
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这次不拉偏架,打屁屁的板子烧了。

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发帖时间:2007-6-24 14:47:16
【西江钓徒 编辑于2007-6-24 14:52:29】
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:28:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

西江钓徒
第:31 楼 
发布日期: 今天 
发布时间: 14:47:16 

十年商旅,远赴西域。
西江钓徒,沙漠驰驱。
所钓何物?瀚海诗鱼。
狐狸垂涎,螃蟹骑驴。
去抢韵律,气喘吁吁。
幸甚至哉,歌以咏娱。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:29:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

偷窥此间景,心中暗自惊。
寒家容寂寞,迷道远逢迎。
洒泪江河满,植林森木荣。
闲情不知倦,胜境多醉翁。

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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:30:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈,有趣!你来我往战的正酣还有助威的。想着若真到战争年代我也是那躲在草丛中偷看的:)

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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:31:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

偷窥此间景,心中暗自惊。
寒家容寂寞,迷道远逢迎。
洒泪江河满,植林森木荣。
闲情不知倦,胜境多醉翁。

——录自《全唐诗》(清帝卷)乾隆诗抄部分
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:32:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

原来这里战犹酣!!!慢慢欣赏!!!

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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:35:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

偷窥此间景,心中暗自惊。
寒家容寂寞,迷道远逢迎。
洒泪江河满,植林森木荣。
闲情不知倦,胜境多醉翁。

——录自《全唐诗》(清帝卷)乾隆诗抄部分

偷窥此间景,心中暗自惊。
寒豕谷叔莫,米首元逢迎。
西目工可满,直木林十荣。
闲情不知倦,胜境多醉翁。——未经刘墉修改前原稿
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:36:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

为狐狸解脱

莫怪狐狸磨蟹牙,
咬文嚼字思无邪。
句佳不止赖锤炼,
诗外功夫诗内花。

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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:38:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,寓学于乐,这样就可以多点机会熟悉上入去的字了。谢谢!

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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:39:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

螃蟹偷偷潜入江,
老牛无语掩门窗。
明明约好知音客,
突闪恒星难见双。

真圣主明君也。君别片刻,当刮目相看。弘历你这家伙越来越厉害了,罗锅只有叹服。
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9494,难怪雍正不把皇位传给三郎了,这便谜底。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-30 00:40:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

天气好,老蓑衣兄估计晒蓑衣狐裘去了。
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