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像鱼呼吸

河南彭三县
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Posted: 2009-12-28 06:41:06 Post subject: 像鱼呼吸

一个躺在珠宝店门口外呻吟的人像鱼呼吸一个，一个，一个，一个躺在根浴房台阶下呻吟的人像鱼呼吸我好像在套用别人的比喻—— 这是条被商潮抛弃在岸上的鱼翻着白肚皮用腮帮困难地呼吸这是条在夜的灯光下呼吸的鱼仿佛永远都没有黑暗吗？这是条在我的眼睛里呼吸的鱼仿佛永远都没有潮水吗？当我忧郁的时候东方已泛起了鱼肚白 _________________ 为人总根于心，创作总根于情。 473000河南省南阳市农业银行合规办事处（伏牛路18号）

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Posted: 2009-12-30 21:34:29 Post subject:

不错的留白

江南雨
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Joined: 03 Jul 2009
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Posted: 2010-01-02 07:53:48 Post subject:

当我忧郁的时候东方已泛起了鱼肚白 _________________ 陕西姜华

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