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五绝•君遥忽悠
红叶笑西风
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PostPosted: 2009-12-27 06:39:24    Post subject: 五绝•君遥忽悠 Reply with quote

君如天上月
遥望每成诗
忽满还缺处
悠然两不知
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PostPosted: 2009-12-27 07:10:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

红叶笑西风 wrote:
君如天上月
遥望每成诗
忽满还缺处
悠然两不知
窈窕淑女及15岁以下少女勿进!
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君遥
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PostPosted: 2009-12-27 07:16:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

红叶笑西风 wrote:
君如天上月
遥望每成诗
忽满还缺处
悠然两不知


咦,君遥忽悠是谁呀?
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PostPosted: 2009-12-27 22:44:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

君遥 wrote:
红叶笑西风 wrote:
君如天上月
遥望每成诗
忽满还缺处
悠然两不知


咦,君遥忽悠是谁呀?

明知故问,不予理睬,哈哈!
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红叶笑西风
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PostPosted: 2009-12-27 22:46:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
红叶笑西风 wrote:
君如天上月
遥望每成诗
忽满还缺处
悠然两不知
窈窕淑女及15岁以下少女勿进!

哎哟,淑女写的诗,那是老少皆宜,雅俗共赏.特别欢迎3岁的李盈枝小朋友! Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-12-27 23:30:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
红叶笑西风 wrote:
君如天上月
遥望每成诗
忽满还缺处
悠然两不知
窈窕淑女及15岁以下少女勿进!


严重抗议 Laughing Laughing
改为欢迎窈窕淑女光临
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PostPosted: 2009-12-28 03:48:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

君遥 wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
红叶笑西风 wrote:
君如天上月
遥望每成诗
忽满还缺处
悠然两不知
窈窕淑女及15岁以下少女勿进!


严重抗议 Laughing Laughing
...

耶^^君遥红叶手拉手,两个臭皮匠,胜过一个李盈枝.
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PostPosted: 2009-12-28 22:12:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

红叶笑西风 wrote:
君遥 wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
红叶笑西风 wrote:
君如天上月
遥望每成诗
忽满还缺处
悠然两不知
窈窕淑女及15岁以下少女勿进!


严重抗议 Laughing Laughing
...

耶^^君遥红叶手拉手,两个臭皮匠,胜过一个李盈枝.

9494,让他吃不了,兜着走
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PostPosted: 2009-12-28 22:38:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

君遥 wrote:
红叶笑西风 wrote:
君遥 wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
红叶笑西风 wrote:
君如天上月
遥望每成诗
忽满还缺处
悠然两不知
窈窕淑女及15岁以下少女勿进!


严重抗议 Laughing Laughing
...

耶^^君遥红叶手拉手,两个臭皮匠,胜过一个李盈枝.

9494,让他吃不了,兜着走
握手,握手,握握手。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-29 10:46:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

(李家三郎改)

君如李上月
遥望每家诗
忽满三缺处
悠然郎不知
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PostPosted: 2009-12-29 10:47:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

(水湾筏者 改)

君如水上月
遥望一湾诗
忽满竹筏处
悠然者不知
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