米运刚
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 Posted: 2009-12-04 05:41:21 Post subject: 正宫 朝天子 归隐 |
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正宫 朝天子 归隐
写一个晓月，缈一岭黄叶，晨烟流如玉液。伴牧童三两声香瓜甜果，咕噜进岩畔榭。
忘了烦恼，丢了世怨，尔虞我诈从此别。管他升降，管他涨泻，和风细雨心自洁。 |
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米运刚
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| Posted: 2009-12-04 05:44:23 Post subject: |
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| 各位诗友，有事耽搁一月许，留两曲请批评。回来再叙。 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2009-12-04 09:25:47 Post subject: |
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好一个"和风细雨心自洁"!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2009-12-04 11:29:29 Post subject: |
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| 和风细雨心自洁 |
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又一方天
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| Posted: 2009-12-24 18:48:04 Post subject: |
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忘了烦恼，丢了世怨，尔虞我诈从此别。管他升降，管他涨泻，
----活脱脱正直心结
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空钩久垂
钓得
烟波月醉 |
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米运刚
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| Posted: 2010-01-23 08:43:05 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢白云兄、庆宏兄、方天兄！ |
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米运刚
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| Posted: 2010-01-23 08:46:08 Post subject: |
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| “写一弯晓月”“描一岭黄叶”一时键误，打错了两字：个、渺。很不好意思！ |
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