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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-12-20 12:50:33    Post subject: 别(外一首) Reply with quote



才想起逃离?或许晚了
湿漉漉的云儿已往深秋的墓穴
扔下第一朵玫瑰
雪白雪白的
而你,还在盘旋

听说是要南行
去吧,在这道别的日子
只想说声谢谢,谢谢你临行前眷恋的歌声
哦,不要忘记带走这只魔盒
其实盒子里的东西
早已逃逸,
而这最后一件仅仅为你
如果那天,如果
陷落 他乡的孤寂

转身,静静地
让我朝着相反的方向
欣赏一只瞌睡虫俯身笔尖的睡姿
好想浅寐,寐于浅冬
寐于洁白的梦里,让一些白色的文字
游弋在白色的空旷

*12月9日, Toronto第一场大雪封门的清晨,嘎嘎雁鸣掠过我的窗帷



垂雨如弦
你却束手,束手于一张龟板
篆刻满腹心事
甲骨如弓, 如你
佝偻的脊柱,抚曲无声

我在三舍之外听琴
听高山流水,似瑟瑟冬雨
湿透
一座坟茔
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2009-12-20 17:06:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

好想浅寐,寐于浅冬
寐于洁白的梦里,让一些白色的文字
游弋在白色的空旷

两首情感细腻的好诗,让人忧伤而心动。
问好白水
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 05:19:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

的确,两首诗都带着触动心灵的忧伤,特别是第二首,读后那冷的感觉,不是一般的。
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一品红
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PostPosted: 2009-12-22 04:21:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

非常让人感伤的两首。白白姊妹,想你了。俺最近没写新诗,写了几首古体的。
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上城
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PostPosted: 2009-12-22 08:15:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

12月9日, Toronto第一场大雪封门的清晨,嘎嘎雁鸣掠过我的窗帷

好景色。东南没有雪。但中国前段时间长江流域普降暴雪。从报纸上看,
加拿大温哥华气温都零下了。问好白水
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-12-22 23:08:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢海军,荷梦,一品红,上城,祝圣诞快乐。

潘多拉打开魔盒释放出人世间的所有邪恶——贪婪、欲望,虚无、诽谤、嫉妒、痛苦,灾难,死亡,,,,,,当她盖上盒子时,却留下了雅典娜为了挽救人类命运而悄悄放在盒子底层的美好东西“希望”,但愿我们能再次打开它。

有时想想,事物都有它的两面性。伯牙在子期墓前抚琴,悲至极至,但这悲剧的结局,却留下《高山流水》千古绝唱, 令人至今深信凡尘仍有真切的友情,这也是人类希望所在。 或许我们真应该好好感谢雅典娜。
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上城
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PostPosted: 2009-12-23 06:26:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

潘多拉打开魔盒,类似的寓言太多了。读一读有益心智


我喜欢读东“东郭先生与狼”,“农夫与蛇”这样的中国寓言

Very Happy 圣诞快乐!雅典娜可是战神呀

发张照片:
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枯蝶
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PostPosted: 2009-12-24 01:11:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

作散文读 ,别具。
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安红红
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PostPosted: 2009-12-24 03:12:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

信什么就有什么~

问好白水~
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2009-12-24 18:42:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢!
——祝圣诞快乐!!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-12-24 21:35:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

上城 wrote:
潘多拉打开魔盒,类似的寓言太多了。读一读有益心智


我喜欢读东“东郭先生与狼”,“农夫与蛇”这样的中国寓言

Very Happy 圣诞快乐!雅典娜可是战神呀

发张照片:


上城好,你不是第一个人对我说喜欢读“东郭先生与狼”,“农夫与蛇”这样的中国寓言, 谢谢 Very Happy

给你个链接
http://zh.wikipedia.org/zh-cn/%E9%9B%85%E5%85%B8%E5%A8%9C

雅典娜是希腊神话中的胜利女神与智慧女神,亦是农业与园艺的保护神、司职法律与秩序的女神,奥林匹斯十二主神之一,据说祂传授纺织、绘画、雕刻、陶艺、畜牧等技艺给人类,亦是位女战神

其实我最感兴趣的是这张照片,是江汉路吗?

双节快乐 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-12-24 21:37:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

枯蝶 wrote:
作散文读 ,别具。


好喜欢你的笔名,让我想起美丽的标本
双节快乐
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PostPosted: 2009-12-24 21:38:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
信什么就有什么~

问好白水~


问好红红,借你吉言,2010 年我信财神 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-12-24 21:39:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
喜欢!
——祝圣诞快乐!!


问好老师,双节快乐 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-12-25 21:17:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

你也传张Toronto大雪封门的景象,整个诗与景就完整了。我这是深圳某个地方拍的

问好白水。圣诞好。主啊,是时候了
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 06:38:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

两首结尾都不错.
新年快乐!!!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 12:25:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 18:04:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

听高山流水,忆伯牙抚琴。瑟瑟冬雨,湿透坟茔。。。够伤感的。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 20:59:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

上城 wrote:
你也传张Toronto大雪封门的景象,整个诗与景就完整了。我这是深圳某个地方拍的
问好白水。圣诞好。主啊,是时候了
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圣蛋节,耶稣蛋,吃了蛋,我就是耶稣诞
...


早不说,我也该吃个蛋才是 Wink

新年好
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PostPosted: 2009-12-26 21:00:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
两首结尾都不错.
新年快乐!!!


问好福治,新年快乐。
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