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君山楚女
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PostPosted: 2009-12-20 19:57:12    Post subject: 一瞥 Reply with quote

冬日多情斜照楼,
婆姨无事漫梳头,
痴心当数阳台雀,
振羽舔毛争一流。

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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2009-12-20 20:21:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

好一幅冬日速写图!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-20 21:54:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

君山楚女 wrote:
冬日多情斜照楼,
婆姨无事漫梳头,
痴心当数阳台雀,
振羽舔毛争一流。

[急就]
清新明快,自然流畅。韵味颇佳,大赏!
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君山楚女
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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 18:12:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
好一幅冬日速写图!


谢谢黄老先生的鼓励。我一定不懈努力,争取写得好一点,多一点,藉此表示我的感谢之忱。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 18:16:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
君山楚女 wrote:
冬日多情斜照楼,
婆姨无事漫梳头,
痴心当数阳台雀,
振羽舔毛争一流。

[急就]
清新明快,自然流畅。韵味颇佳,大赏!


李兄,谢谢您的点评。我一定记住“清新明快,自然流畅”这八个字,因为她本质上点名了诗歌的生命所在。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-21 18:23:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

君山楚女 wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
君山楚女 wrote:
冬日多情斜照楼,
婆姨无事漫梳头,
痴心当数阳台雀,
振羽舔毛争一流。

[急就]
清新明快,自然流畅。韵味颇佳,大赏!


李兄,谢谢您的点评。我一定记住“清新明快,自然流畅”这八个字,因为她本质上点名了诗歌的生命所在。
问好!别忘了此诗韵味——极为耐品,令人流连忘返。为此特过去复制我的签名档过来——

诗云:“发现美,研究美,表现美。”
子曰:“给传统诗词注入新鲜血液。”
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