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原创《白鹭》
远山云树
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PostPosted: 2006-06-08 23:20:24    Post subject: 原创《白鹭》 Reply with quote

低沉的天空
又低沉了一些
撒满铁灰的丘陵
终于放弃隆起的努力
又低沉了一些

偶尔坠落的枯叶 
砸向似乎凝固的水面
也许深水之下
鱼们将要冬眠

一只白鹭的影子
忽现于天边
沿着丘陵起伏而移动
转眼已在池塘之上
展开的羽翼
切入云层
有力地按击
将头颈的长矛
在粘稠的冷气里推进

天空便高旷了一些

对岸的寒风 
渡水而来
我竟颤栗了
抖落一身残叶
朝着风中奋力地抛撒
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尹士林
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PostPosted: 2006-06-09 01:07:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

天空便高旷了一些

对岸的寒风 
渡水而来
我竟颤栗了
抖落一身残叶
朝着风中奋力地抛撒
!!!
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忧郁过、犹豫过,从未放弃过!!!!!
河北易县中学 尹士林
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亦先寒
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PostPosted: 2006-06-09 05:14:09    Post subject: 打个包来 Reply with quote

我知道你最近调子不错,把你写的打个包多发一点来吧。让我看看。
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远山云树
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PostPosted: 2006-06-12 00:47:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="尹士林"]天空便高旷了一些

对岸的寒风 
渡水而来
我竟颤栗了
抖落一身残叶
朝着风中奋力地抛撒
!!![/quote]

谢阅
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远山云树
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PostPosted: 2006-06-12 00:50:43    Post subject: Re: 打个包来 Reply with quote

[quote="亦先寒"]我知道你最近调子不错,把你写的打个包多发一点来吧。让我看看。[/quote]

病了几天,才见老兄帖子,谢过。
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