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失落的心灵
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PostPosted: 2007-03-14 19:35:57    Post subject: 失落的心灵 Reply with quote

眼睛在昨天那么真
今天我却害怕
柳絮飞扬的日子
美在人生中相遇
珍贵在情缘里相吸

时间滚滚流淌
冲淡了缘分的色彩
思念的心情有美丽的泪花
你的余温却越来越少

雨还是那么晶莹
小花伞却不再鲜艳
我还是我
你的心田却好久没有浇灌
蔷薇在风中枯萎

有风没有月亮
心灵在失落的时候微笑
脑海里却回响我们的心语
孤独的天使在伊甸园里哭泣

中国.江苏.张敏
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PostPosted: 2007-03-14 19:57:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

总体的感觉,抒情有点空
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