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月，在露水里摇着轮椅

河南彭三县
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Posted: 2009-12-10 04:24:08 Post subject: 月，在露水里摇着轮椅

我躲在夜幕的左端一只乌鸦的翅膀之下一颗露水像一只流萤穿过花蕊扑到我的掌心轻舐我的神经顿时感觉人间顼碎的气息已化为乌有成为纯真的美妙—— 一个洁净的世界喊我的名字一个洁净的魂灵喊我的名字星光灿烂慰藉乌云低贱下沉审视露水里我的影子是多么的浑圆剔透馨香哪有些许鼠灰的忧郁哦，月我已是像神迹的月在露水里摇着轮椅一路走来碾碎了荆棘碾碎了叹息碾碎了左右拐点的坎坷我轻快地构思着：爱和成功的终点与家与灵感的距离究竟有多远或多圆?! 月，在露水里摇着轮椅向左向右向前...... _________________ 为人总根于心，创作总根于情。 473000河南省南阳市农业银行合规办事处（伏牛路18号）

山城子
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Posted: 2009-12-10 18:04:56 Post subject:

审视露水里我的影子是多么的浑圆剔透馨香哪有些许鼠灰的忧郁哦，月我已是像神迹的月在露水里摇着轮椅一路走来碾碎了荆棘碾碎了叹息碾碎了左右拐点的坎坷我轻快地构思着：爱和成功的终点与家与灵感的距离究竟有多远或多圆?! _学习欣赏！！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

河南彭三县
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Posted: 2009-12-10 21:15:14 Post subject:

问好大哥来读！！ _________________ 为人总根于心，创作总根于情。 473000河南省南阳市农业银行合规办事处（伏牛路18号）

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-12-11 07:55:08 Post subject:

月，在露水里摇着轮椅很有想象，意境很美哦~

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-11 19:38:54 Post subject:

月，在露水里摇着轮诗情画意

子在川上曰
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Posted: 2009-12-11 19:48:57 Post subject:

月，在露水里摇着轮椅向左向右向前...... 唯美诗意！ _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

河南彭三县
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Posted: 2009-12-18 04:03:28 Post subject:

问好诗友们来读 _________________ 为人总根于心，创作总根于情。 473000河南省南阳市农业银行合规办事处（伏牛路18号）

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