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PostPosted: 2009-12-06 15:58:15    Post subject: 国粹网攻擂一联 Reply with quote

擂联:十年龙破壁 一曲凤求凰 知心感慨犹如我 [沧海劫涩]
攻联:轻点鼠临屏 重捶人拜月 会意谦虚准驭她 [君山楚女]
说明:下联说玩电脑的事,人拜月,指电影《拜月记》,弄砸了就麻烦了。 

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PostPosted: 2009-12-06 22:07:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

十年---轻点,一曲---重捶

对仗略欠工整,君山兄可再斟酌。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-06 22:26:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

给君山老弟出个上联——

经水浒(仄),进红楼(平),带金瓶梅小姐西游英法德三国(仄)

——巧对联律可适当放宽,平仄有序交替即可。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-07 20:59:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

也來开开心:

经水浒,进红楼,帶金瓶小姐西游英法德三国;
望汉月,思佳客,忆故人漁父出塞古陽關六詞.

<望汉月>;
<思佳客>;
<忆故人>;
<漁父>;
<出塞>;
<古陽關>;
上述六首均為唐宋詞的詞牌名稱.
以古詞牌名稱對古典小説名稱.
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PostPosted: 2009-12-07 23:57:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

经水浒,进红楼,帶金瓶小姐西游英法德三国;
望汉月,思佳客,忆故人漁父出塞古陽關六詞.

<望汉月>;
<思佳客>;
<忆故人>;
<漁父>;
<出塞>;
<古陽關>;
上述六首均為唐宋詞的詞牌名稱.
以古詞牌名稱對古典小説名稱.

我怎么就没想到用词牌名?哈哈,后悔莫及。

帶——金瓶(梅)小姐——西游——英法德三国;
忆——故人(?)漁父——出塞——古陽關六詞.

从八百多个词牌中,再找个和金瓶梅情投意合的来。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-08 00:02:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

作茧自缚,多年来还有两个自己没对上的上联,其中一个是——

女家嫁出好女子(仄),生男为甥(平),山山出好女子(仄);
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PostPosted: 2009-12-08 03:24:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

女家嫁出好女子(仄),生男为甥(平),山山出好女子(仄);
——仓颉应该可以对出来,他会造字。三年了,我还是没有对出来。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-08 04:10:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

罗贤生 wrote:
女家嫁出好女子(仄),生男为甥(平),山山出好女子(仄);
...

夫人(你的)没在家?谢天谢地,终于从床底下爬出来了。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-08 04:17:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
罗贤生 wrote:
女家嫁出好女子(仄),生男为甥(平),山山出好女子(仄);
...

夫人(你的)没在家?谢天谢地,终于从床底下爬出来了。

夫人(不是你的)调理一段时间身体好多了,准备先上班,后期手术看情况.
《北美枫》不错,和《红叶集》有共识联想。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-08 04:25:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

罗贤生 wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
罗贤生 wrote:
女家嫁出好女子(仄),生男为甥(平),山山出好女子(仄);
...

夫人(你的)没在家?谢天谢地,终于从床底下爬出来了。

夫人(不是你的)调理一段时间身体好多了,准备先上班,后期手术看情况.
...
胰腺需做手术?身体第一,千万保重!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-08 19:53:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
十年---轻点,一曲---重捶

对仗略欠工整,君山兄可再斟酌。


下联前两句是自对,即轻松点对重捶,这也是充许的。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-09 15:43:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
给君山老弟出个上联——

...


今天早上五点才上网,见得先生妙语,如获至宝。先生是大手笔,从大处纵览、泼墨。学生只能摘几个特写镜头,请先生指点、赐教。

嘉句:经水浒,进红楼,帶金瓶小姐西游英法德三国
拙句:摸石头,闯白虎,托观音大士东访魏蜀吴一中

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PostPosted: 2009-12-09 15:56:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

君山楚女 wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
给君山老弟出个上联——

...


今天早上五点才上网,见得先生妙语,如获至宝。先生是大手笔,从大处纵览、泼墨。学生只能摘几个特写镜头,请先生指点、赐教。

嘉句:经水浒,进红楼,帶金瓶小姐西游英法德三国
拙句:摸石头,闯白虎,托观音大士东访魏蜀吴一中
回复怎么一点击就没了?
回复:早上好!哈哈,少一个字。
《水浒》、《红楼》、《金瓶梅》、《西游》、《三国》。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-09 19:45:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

先生慧眼.我错成五部书了。观音即《观音心经》。仍对以书名,这样为正。不知可否?

丽句:经水浒,进红楼,帶金瓶小姐西游英法德三国;

拙句:化齐民,食本草,任春秋老子尚书勾股弦九章

说明:列五部代表作《齐民要术》[工科],《本草纲目》[药物],《春秋配》[戏曲],《尚书》[史书][尚与上通,可表方位],《九章算经》[数理]
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PostPosted: 2009-12-09 21:49:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
作茧自缚,多年来还有两个自己没对上的上联,其中一个是——
...


女家嫁出好女子,生男为甥,山山出好女子

色丰艳多绝色糸,产金作铲,夕夕多绝色糸

色丰二字前置,很不理想。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-10 18:11:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

女家嫁出好女子,生男为甥,山山出好女子;(李)
日西晒多晃日光,木子结李,夕夕多晃日光.

这样对行吗?
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