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楚女求下联

君山楚女
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Posted: 2009-12-09 16:04:28 Post subject: 楚女求下联

拙句：过沙汀，绕白桦，由蒲柳人家东进钱锺书老舍 _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

李盈枝
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Posted: 2009-12-09 16:16:10 Post subject:

君山楚女 wrote:

拙句：过沙汀，绕白桦，由蒲柳人家东进钱锺书老舍

过沙汀，绕白桦，陪吴敬梓先生东进钱锺书老舍；（君山楚女）
经水浒，进红楼，带金瓶梅小姐西游英法德三国。（李家三郎）

擅自改一下，这样我自己多年对不出来的上联就有了着落。只是必须依现代读音，否则，“国”是入声，就无法作为下联了。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-12-09 17:41:26 Post subject:

好联！

君山楚女
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Posted: 2009-12-09 19:56:38 Post subject:

先生改得很也。原来我就是想对的嘉句。但总对不上劲，故别做了个联子征对。 _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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