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七律•次韵北美文学网老山先生

李盈枝
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Posted: 2009-12-05 22:25:03 Post subject: 七律•次韵北美文学网老山先生

江山如画久凝眸，不觉云遮太白楼。极目妖娆三万里，放怀烂漫五千秋。云霞湖面轻摇荡，鸟雀枝头正唱酬。苦旅有涯人将老，豪情无限水长流。附老山先生原玉：老伴七十华诞感赋人生七十畅回眸，雪雨苍松夕照楼。曾是冰心开画卷，更将节笔写春秋。胸怀万里颜难老，力拔千钧志可酬。秋叶黄花仍醉眼，霜眉未必减风流。

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Posted: 2009-12-06 07:31:06 Post subject:

苦旅有涯人将老，豪情无限水长流。秋叶黄花仍醉眼，霜眉未必减风流。都是好句！唱和俱佳！

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Posted: 2009-12-13 04:35:28 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

苦旅有涯人将老，豪情无限水长流。
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老山先生的堪称佳作，我只是步韵学习之。

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