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剥古句拗绝一组
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 20:27:15    Post subject: 剥古句拗绝一组 Reply with quote

拗绝•试剥古句

止谤莫如先自修,
人有鸡犬丢则求。
欲影正者端其表,
当似豹去皮却留。

《魏志》:“止谤莫若自修。”
《孟子》:“人有鸡犬放(走失),则知求之,有放心而不知求。”
《盐铁论》:“欲影正者端其表。”
《全唐诗》:“人死留名,豹死留皮。”
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 20:28:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

拗绝•再剥古句

素履往者则无咎,
兰生幽谷依然香。
山欲争之水归海,
调弦自娱遵宫商。

《周易大传》:“素履往,无咎。”
《淮南子》:“兰生幽谷,不为莫服而不芳。”(“莫服”,无人顾及。)
《刘子》:“山海争水,必归海,非海求之,其势顺也。”
《新语》:“立事者不离道德,调弦者不失宫商。”
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 20:30:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

拗绝•三剥古句

合抱之木生毫末,
渊智达洞累学功。
行百里者半九十,
井到见泉掘始终。

《老子》:“合抱之木,生于毫末。”
《意林》:“渊智达洞,累学之功也。”
《战国策》:“行百里者半九十。”
《抱朴子》:“井不达泉则犹不掘也。”
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 20:31:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

拗绝•四剥古句

不学犹如对墙立,
嘉肴之味食方知。
肯效毛嫱施脂粉,
璞玉精琢得好诗。

《尚书》:“人而不学,其犹正墙面而立。”
《礼记》:“虽有嘉肴,弗食不知其旨也。”
《盐铁论》:“毛嫱,天下之姣人也,待香泽脂粉而后容。”
《荀子》:“人之于文学也,犹玉之于琢磨也。”
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 20:32:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

拗绝•五剥古句

自美其美美何在?
美女不出人争求。
山峭者崩泽满溢,
怠慢忘身祸临头。

《庄子》:“其美者自美,吾不知其美也。”
《墨子》:“譬若美女,处而不出,人争求之。”
《新书》:“山峭者崩,泽满者溢。”
《荀子》:“怠慢忘身,祸灾乃作。”
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 20:33:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

拗绝•六剥古句

美色不同目皆佳,
英雄气象诗之花。
处严冬莫衣袭夏,
春兰秋菊各一家。

《论衡》:“美色不同面,皆佳于目。”
《四溟诗话》:“赋诗要有英雄气象。人不敢道,我则道;人不敢为,我则为之。”
《雪涛阁集》:“西古人语言之迹而冒以为古,是处严冬而袭夏之葛者。”
《随园诗话》:“诗如天生花卉,春兰秋菊,各有一时之秀。”
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 20:36:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

拗绝•七剥古句

瑕可为瑜在于改,
同词重句文之瘤。
诗要避俗更避熟,
百炼钢化绕指柔。

《秋星阁诗话》:“能改则瑕可为瑜。”
《文心雕龙》:“同词重句,文之疣赘也。”
《艺概》:“诗要避俗,更要避熟。”(熟,旧读入声。)
《昭昧詹言》:“百炼钢化为绕指柔矣。”
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 20:36:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

拗绝•八剥古句

巧言无义必不正,
郑人买椟却还珠。
国之云雨乃鸿笔,
春蚕远胜巧蜘蛛。

《墨子》:“若言而无义,……则虽有巧工,必不得正焉。”
《韩非子》:“郑人买其椟,而还其珠。”
《论衡》:“鸿笔之人,国之云雨也。”
《西清诗话》:“蜘蛛虽巧不如蚕。”
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 20:37:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

拗绝•九剥古句

德见于文君子本,
垂天之翼出鹏身。
志高为词意必远,
有识不步他人尘。

《抱朴子》:“德行文学者,君子之本。”
《文史通义》:“有大鹏千里之身,而后可以运垂天之翼。”
《稼轩词序》:“志高者,意必远。”
《原诗》:“唯有识,……不但不随世人脚跟,并亦不随古人脚跟。”
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 20:38:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

拗绝•十剥古句

一川难为海之广,
一狐枉思裘暖身。
一手不会拍得响,
一枝岂能悬千钧?

《鹖冠子》:“海水之广,非独仰一川之流也。”
《慎子》:“粹白之裘,盖非一狐之皮也。”
《韩非子》:“一手独拍,虽疾无声。”
《淮南子》:“托于一人之手,譬若悬千钧之重于木之一枝。”
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 20:40:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

拗绝•剥古十一

隔靴搔痒题不着,
射者仪毫而失墙。
兵非乌合意为帅,
举一纲而万目张。

《诗话总龟》:“诗不着题,如隔靴搔痒。”
《文心雕龙》:“射者仪毫而失墙。”
《夕堂绪论》:“意犹帅也,无帅之兵,谓之乌合。”
《诗谱序》:“举一纲而万目张。”
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 20:41:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

拗绝•剥古十二

未见好德如好色,
莫待无花空折枝。
家道正而天下定,
如鱼似水永相知。

《论语》:“吾未见好德如好色者也。”
《全唐诗》:“莫待无花空折枝。”
《周易》:“家道正而天下定。”
《淮海词》:“如鱼似水相知。”
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 21:24:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

至理名言结集成诗,一两首于我尚可来得,如此浩篇鸿章,非我所能及也。治学博学如斯,真可谓山高人为峰,叹为观止。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 21:49:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

君山楚女 wrote:
至理名言结集成诗,一两首于我尚可来得,如此浩篇鸿章,非我所能及也。治学博学如斯,真可谓山高人为峰,叹为观止。


与君山兄同感。从李兄处可学很多东西。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-05 22:22:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

君山楚女、qinghongh二位贤弟一唱一和,令愚兄无地自容。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-06 22:09:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

李兄请查看短讯。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-06 22:21:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
李兄请查看短讯。
遵嘱看过了,谢谢!
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