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十步之外是一树桃花（组诗）

子在川上曰
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Joined: 18 Nov 2009
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Posted: 2009-12-04 20:13:18 Post subject: 十步之外是一树桃花（组诗）

文/子在川上曰一面前的书是一个熟透了的蜜桃几大口吃完一二三四五桃核弃于十步之外落地生根瞬间已是一树灿烂的桃花有人远远的看我和桃树我和桃树远远的看着那人谁是风景？谁是看风景的人？二陶潜摸索着走了几十年走出山洞后惊喜的发现十步之外是一树桃花二十步之外是一片盛开的桃林他抚摸着桃花轻柔如梦历史和梦如桃花在他手中舞动三闭上眼睛十步之外是一树桃花睁开眼睛十步之内站着诗人有风从记忆深处哒哒而来如一阵急骤的马蹄声桃花纷飞如雨散落了一地诗的意象四相距十步我们默默相对一只蝴蝶从中间翩翩飞过我说那年我的梦被一片飘落的花瓣击碎你笑了抖落满身的花瓣身上挂满了青涩的果实姓名：陈宝川地址：深圳市宝安区福永政丰北路19号能达办公设备邮编：518103 电话：13922879062 _________________ 我们是行走在历史中的一群鱼，现在正在大海的深处。

李献
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Joined: 05 May 2009
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Location: 广东吴川
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Posted: 2009-12-04 20:22:29 Post subject:

我说那年我的梦被一片飘落的花瓣击碎问好！ _________________ 诗是心灵的知己，一生不离不弃。

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2009-12-04 23:05:06 Post subject:

桃花纷飞如雨散落了一地诗的意象没用雨丝串起来

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