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高阳台.夜思

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Posted: 2007-01-19 13:28:18 Post subject: 高阳台.夜思

月坠花窗，风摇柳巷，残灯扶影依阑。看几流星，寅时又渡千山。吹箫欲伴秋声住，问秋声，说甚添寒。想嫣然，一缕幽思，枉自纠缠。当年壮志今何在？只闲心暗换，付了飞烟。昨日吟诗，明朝对酒琴边。多情但学庄生梦，掩重门，迷蝶追莲。且贪欢，醒也翩跹，醉也翩跹。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-01-19 17:04:46 Post subject:

MM好词

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Posted: 2007-01-22 22:51:27 Post subject:

谢谢白水帅哥鼓励评阅。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-02-02 00:51:48 Post subject:

很不错的一阕，文笔流畅婉丽，情味俱佳，提读~

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Posted: 2007-02-02 05:28:43 Post subject:

谢谢评阅。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-03-05 13:08:31 Post subject:

詞心雅正，拜讀欣賞！ _________________ 壇前易解拈花意席上難逢顧曲心

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Posted: 2007-03-11 04:45:44 Post subject: Re: 高阳台.夜思

暗香如沁 wrote:

月坠花窗，风摇柳巷，残灯扶影依阑。
看几流星，辰时又渡千山。
。。。

辰時指上午七點至九點，不知這樣說流星是什麽意思。

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Posted: 2007-03-11 06:31:07 Post subject:

感谢戴玨指正。暗香惭愧。已改。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-03-13 19:55:24 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

谢谢白水帅哥鼓励评阅。 Smile

MM, 何时回北京. 想你了 crying to death

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Posted: 2007-03-14 03:39:07 Post subject:

拜读。问好暗香～ _________________ 十年落叶心间掠，一骑西风山外行。

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Posted: 2007-03-15 11:29:27 Post subject: Re: 高阳台.夜思

风摇柳巷知如沁，月坠花窗来暗香。和平岛上遇故知啊。

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Posted: 2007-03-18 19:11:40 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

暗香如沁 wrote:

谢谢白水帅哥鼓励评阅。 Smile

MM, 何时回北京. 想你了 crying to death

报告，俺终于回来了。
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Posted: 2007-03-18 19:13:49 Post subject:

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拜读。问好暗香～

问好新朋友。暗香认识你们很高兴。
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Posted: 2007-03-18 19:15:43 Post subject: Re: 高阳台.夜思

秋叶 wrote:

风摇柳巷知如沁，月坠花窗来暗香。

和平岛上遇故知啊。

问秋叶好。网络说大也说小。问好。
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