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〖金金作品〗诗三首
金金
进士出身


Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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PostPosted: 2009-11-30 02:35:13    Post subject: 〖金金作品〗诗三首 Reply with quote

《简单的笑,重要的是你》

你的花一样的笑
不许出错
不许被阳光偷看
也不许被某种美丽误解

当最接近梦的季节降临
乌云的怒气
和无声的昼夜
你在梦之外并不知情
是什么让你无知呢?
这不重要!
因为重要的是你
藏身在深情里

2009年11月30日 下午


《中国古典女子》

紫袄泡光
玉油敷面
牙洁品柔
手藏心浸

行以凡气
像著俗缓
可以饱学
可工鄙类

2009年11月28日 晚上


《冬日》

白裙的女孩儿,一枝
红色的小花
横过你足边

白裙的女孩儿
蓝色蝴蝶
停在你的臂弯,无声息

你的黑发,照样
无声息

但已 飞舞起来
在我抬首那刻
你的微笑亦无声响
……

2009年11月28日 中午12时10分成诗
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Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2009-12-01 20:14:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金的诗歌更简约成熟了
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