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13岁赵峰诗歌《心愿》（外一首）

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-03-13 18:58:08 Post subject: 13岁赵峰诗歌《心愿》（外一首）

《心愿》我有一个小小的心愿我想，让甩着银白色尾巴的星星帮我实现我要赶快找到一颗流星但，今天下雨星星没有出现《假期》我一直以为，暑假长寒假短，是因为热胀冷缩，像蒸笼里的馒头是这样吗？赵峰同学简历：赵峰，汉族，现年13岁，河南商丘第八中学二年级学生。2005年以来先后在《中学生学习报》〈绿风诗刊〉《钱宁诗潮》《京九晚报》〈陕北文学〉等报刊上发表诗歌、散文作品20余篇（首）通联地址：河南省商丘市胜利路第八中学二年级 ·十二班赵峰邮政编码：476000 赵福治手机：13937099314 信箱：zhaofuzhia @126.com

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Posted: 2007-03-13 19:17:25 Post subject:

这两首诗歌，才显出属于儿童的天真和童趣，也许比那种所谓的 “成熟”，于他本人更富有身心健康的裨益。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-03-13 21:49:14 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

这两首诗歌，才显出属于儿童的天真和童趣，也许比那种所谓的 “成熟”，于他本人更富

有身心健康的裨益。

兄弟多批评。

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Posted: 2007-03-14 01:59:19 Post subject:

“心愿“ 很好。儿子老子都可爱 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-03-14 04:17:08 Post subject:

有思想！！我要赶快找到一颗流星但，今天下雨星星没有出现

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-03-14 17:33:10 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

“心愿“ 很好。
儿子老子都可爱 Very Happy

问好朋友.

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-03-14 17:40:21 Post subject:

安艾君123 wrote:

有思想！！

我要赶快找到一颗流星
但，今天下雨
星星没有出现

握手.

鲁绪刚
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Posted: 2007-03-14 18:56:24 Post subject:

这两个写的自然,灵动,提起来!

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Posted: 2007-03-14 21:43:52 Post subject:

呵呵不错 _________________ 里面有点自己的东西 http://blog.sina.com.cn/sashizi

kokho
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Posted: 2007-03-15 10:13:09 Post subject:

拜读问好；） _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

曼畅
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Posted: 2007-03-15 15:43:39 Post subject:

童趣。情趣。。。老乡曼畅问候你父子俩

左岸
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Posted: 2007-03-15 18:13:43 Post subject:

用形象说话，路子很正 _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-03-17 03:31:01 Post subject:

不错啊，老子英雄儿好汉~

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