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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-11-28 15:22:26    Post subject: 画廊 Reply with quote

画廊


(一)两小无猜

画一枚落果
她用唇红为你涂抹一个太阳
指一弯晓月
他用露珠儿为你注满一汪清泉
那天你把太阳
扔到水里
于是,你们就一同跳入
玫瑰的大海

(二)冥王星

向日葵,梵高的向日葵。
几多怜爱的眼睛
向日葵一般
仰望着你星光璀灿的
遗像

而活着的梵高
却找不到
找不到一位如此怜爱的女子
作他
凡尘温柔的嫁娘

(三)画蝶

莫喊哥哥,
哥哥只是过客
窗外雪薄, 薄薄的雪花
掩不住千层底流连的蝶影
你还在梦中。梦

沉沉,脉
也沉沉。沉沉地沉入
时光隧道
沉入遥远的周庄
那些双双起舞的蝶儿
翩翩地
拍打着你的脉冲


(四)不解之谜?
题记:有人疑惑:西班牙画家毕加索享年91岁,为何被称为“世界上最年轻的画家?他说:“我的每一幅画中都有我的血,这就是我的画的含义。”


浓于墨,落笔流红
你却任性,任性地画
捂不住心动,泵出血色的年轻

你说,你要用心搭一座最美的宫 殿
她不敢进, 只怕进的去
出不来
卢浮宫的索引
是你不羁的胡子
那些缠缠绕绕的眷恋,那些顽童涂鸦
的迷宫

(五)莫奈 * 睡莲

美,是你
落笔朦胧的睡意
是三更末梢颤动的光波,是悬挂于画架
那张薄薄的萱纸
不要点墨。哪怕
轻轻地一点
就会剥落一瓣心扉,你瞧
你瞧这些脱落于水的莲瓣儿, 美得那么
让人心痛

(Dec 25/2009)


一月一日*临屏诗题画*归档

再见了,这就回蜗居。
那轮晓月,已架起天线唤我,
你可看见透明的颈项,牵挂着深情地回眸

淡淡的尾影
算是告别的礼物, 拿去
当笔,写你的小小的期盼
写你悄悄的心思



钟声就这么响了
我不想起床
云海温柔,包裹着我的梦乡
梦中有漫天的红叶
你说叶儿落地
就会生根,生根就会长出智慧的大树

我不关心时光
隧道,是否畅通无阻
我只关心树上的叶子是否鲜红
如你手掌的命脉
透着血色

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PostPosted: 2009-11-28 21:17:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

精致的几个.学习!
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PostPosted: 2009-11-29 00:38:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

哥哥只是过客 Very Happy Very Happy

姐是传说
爹是 。。
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PostPosted: 2009-11-29 07:56:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

精美细腻,很古典韵味。我来了,白白姊妹~ Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2009-11-29 14:24:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

要是能看到畫就更好。
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PostPosted: 2009-11-29 22:47:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
画廊


(一)两小无猜
...


頗典雅的小詩,

我喜歡這樣的寫作..
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PostPosted: 2009-12-01 01:02:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy
又一力作,问好白水.诗歌把我们联系在一起.
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-12-01 20:48:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

沙漠 wrote:
精致的几个.学习!


沙漠好,谢谢鼓励
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PostPosted: 2009-12-01 21:02:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
哥哥只是过客 Very Happy Very Happy

姐是传说
爹是 。。


读你的回帖就乐。好吧,我就接一句:“爹是。。。。。。没人“, 你该小得意了Very Happy 网络本是个虚拟的世界,当初白水大帅哥不换马甲都失踪了,何况那常换马甲的 Very Happy Very Happy

anyway, 网络虽然是虚拟世界,也希望看到更多美好的东西,,,,,,
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PostPosted: 2009-12-01 21:04:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

一品红 wrote:
精美细腻,很古典韵味。我来了,白白姊妹~ Embarassed


问好一品红。等你的大作。不要采访稿哦 Wink
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PostPosted: 2009-12-01 21:21:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

戴玨 wrote:
要是能看到畫就更好。


问好戴玨, 这不是配画诗 Razz

前一段在美国看了一些展览,这只是看画展的一些感受吧。
比如‘向日葵‘, 婚姻是梵高终生的缺憾,他死后却有许多爱怜他的女子,我不知道, 有多少是爱他本人, 又有多少是爱他的名望 ,,,,,,
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PostPosted: 2009-12-01 21:23:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

sfiawong wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
画廊


(一)两小无猜
...


頗典雅的小詩,
...


谢谢鼓励。问好sfiawong Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-12-01 21:33:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

湮雨朦朦 wrote:
Very Happy
又一力作,问好白水.诗歌把我们联系在一起.


是啊,以文会友,诗思似丝,,,,,,远握 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-12-01 23:46:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

对画的解读,深入到骨髓,提炼到位,故诗味浓郁.
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PostPosted: 2009-12-04 22:52:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

吟啸徐行 wrote:
对画的解读,深入到骨髓,提炼到位,故诗味浓郁.


谢谢鼓励。也谢谢你们的诗歌和散文,让我学到很多东西
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PostPosted: 2009-12-17 01:16:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

十多年没有读新诗了,惊羡!
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PostPosted: 2009-12-17 05:31:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

来学习学习
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PostPosted: 2009-12-19 21:31:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

画一枚落果
她用唇红为你涂抹一个太阳
指一弯晓月
他用露珠儿为你注满一汪清泉
那天你把太阳
扔到水里
于是,你们就一同跳入
玫瑰的大海
诗句很美,问好。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-19 22:54:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
十多年没有读新诗了,惊羡!


问好李盈枝, 古韵的朋友几次谈到你,读了你部分诗歌,的确满腹诗书,盼常交流,批评,与我也是一个学习提高的机会。谢谢。周末愉快
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PostPosted: 2009-12-19 22:56:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

骨笛 wrote:
来学习学习

欣赏你的诗歌,淡雅,耐品
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