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白水
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Posted: 2009-11-28 15:22:26 Post subject: 画廊

画廊（一）两小无猜画一枚落果她用唇红为你涂抹一个太阳指一弯晓月他用露珠儿为你注满一汪清泉那天你把太阳扔到水里于是，你们就一同跳入玫瑰的大海（二）冥王星向日葵，梵高的向日葵。几多怜爱的眼睛向日葵一般仰望着你星光璀灿的遗像而活着的梵高却找不到找不到一位如此怜爱的女子作他凡尘温柔的嫁娘（三）画蝶莫喊哥哥，哥哥只是过客窗外雪薄，薄薄的雪花掩不住千层底流连的蝶影你还在梦中。梦沉沉，脉也沉沉。沉沉地沉入时光隧道沉入遥远的周庄那些双双起舞的蝶儿翩翩地拍打着你的脉冲（四）不解之谜？题记：有人疑惑：西班牙画家毕加索享年91岁，为何被称为“世界上最年轻的画家？他说：“我的每一幅画中都有我的血，这就是我的画的含义。” 血浓于墨，落笔流红你却任性，任性地画捂不住心动，泵出血色的年轻你说，你要用心搭一座最美的宫殿她不敢进，只怕进的去出不来卢浮宫的索引是你不羁的胡子那些缠缠绕绕的眷恋，那些顽童涂鸦的迷宫（五）莫奈 * 睡莲美，是你落笔朦胧的睡意是三更末梢颤动的光波，是悬挂于画架那张薄薄的萱纸不要点墨。哪怕轻轻地一点就会剥落一瓣心扉，你瞧你瞧这些脱落于水的莲瓣儿，美得那么让人心痛（Dec 25/2009) 一月一日临屏诗题画归档再见了，这就回蜗居。那轮晓月，已架起天线唤我，你可看见透明的颈项，牵挂着深情地回眸淡淡的尾影算是告别的礼物，拿去当笔，写你的小小的期盼写你悄悄的心思钟声就这么响了我不想起床云海温柔，包裹着我的梦乡梦中有漫天的红叶你说叶儿落地就会生根，生根就会长出智慧的大树我不关心时光隧道，是否畅通无阻我只关心树上的叶子是否鲜红如你手掌的命脉透着血色 01/01/2010 10.00am

沙漠
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Posted: 2009-11-28 21:17:21 Post subject:

精致的几个.学习! _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

nobody
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Posted: 2009-11-29 00:38:17 Post subject:

哥哥只是过客姐是传说爹是。。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2009-11-29 07:56:25 Post subject:

精美细腻，很古典韵味。我来了，白白姊妹~ _________________ 中国山东，女诗人

戴玨
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Posted: 2009-11-29 14:24:55 Post subject:

要是能看到畫就更好。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

sfiawong
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Posted: 2009-11-29 22:47:59 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

画廊

（一）两小无猜
...

頗典雅的小詩,

我喜歡這樣的寫作..
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湮雨朦朦
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Posted: 2009-12-01 01:02:52 Post subject:

又一力作,问好白水.诗歌把我们联系在一起.

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-01 20:48:42 Post subject:

沙漠 wrote:

精致的几个.学习!

沙漠好，谢谢鼓励

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-01 21:02:30 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

哥哥只是过客

姐是传说
爹是。。

读你的回帖就乐。好吧，我就接一句：“爹是。。。。。。没人“，你该小得意了 Very Happy

网络本是个虚拟的世界，当初白水大帅哥不换马甲都失踪了，何况那常换马甲的 Very Happy

anyway, 网络虽然是虚拟世界，也希望看到更多美好的东西，，，，，，

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-01 21:04:08 Post subject:

一品红 wrote:

精美细腻，很古典韵味。我来了，白白姊妹~ Embarassed

问好一品红。等你的大作。不要采访稿哦 Wink

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-01 21:21:52 Post subject:

戴玨 wrote:

要是能看到畫就更好。

问好戴玨，这不是配画诗 Razz

前一段在美国看了一些展览，这只是看画展的一些感受吧。
比如‘向日葵‘，婚姻是梵高终生的缺憾，他死后却有许多爱怜他的女子，我不知道，有多少是爱他本人，又有多少是爱他的名望，，，，，，

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-01 21:23:14 Post subject:

sfiawong wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

画廊

（一）两小无猜
...

頗典雅的小詩,
...

谢谢鼓励。问好sfiawong Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-01 21:33:54 Post subject:

湮雨朦朦 wrote:

又一力作,问好白水.诗歌把我们联系在一起.

是啊，以文会友，诗思似丝，，，，，，远握 Very Happy

吟啸徐行
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Posted: 2009-12-01 23:46:49 Post subject:

对画的解读,深入到骨髓,提炼到位,故诗味浓郁. _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-04 22:52:56 Post subject:

吟啸徐行 wrote:

对画的解读,深入到骨髓,提炼到位,故诗味浓郁.

谢谢鼓励。也谢谢你们的诗歌和散文，让我学到很多东西

李盈枝
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Posted: 2009-12-17 01:16:58 Post subject:

十多年没有读新诗了，惊羡！

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Posted: 2009-12-17 05:31:47 Post subject:

来学习学习 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2009-12-19 21:31:00 Post subject:

画一枚落果她用唇红为你涂抹一个太阳指一弯晓月他用露珠儿为你注满一汪清泉那天你把太阳扔到水里于是，你们就一同跳入玫瑰的大海诗句很美，问好。 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-19 22:54:04 Post subject:

李盈枝 wrote:

十多年没有读新诗了，惊羡！

问好李盈枝，古韵的朋友几次谈到你，读了你部分诗歌，的确满腹诗书，盼常交流，批评，与我也是一个学习提高的机会。谢谢。周末愉快

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-19 22:56:47 Post subject:

骨笛 wrote:

来学习学习

欣赏你的诗歌，淡雅，耐品

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