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参观南京总统府感触二首

君山楚女
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Posted: 2009-11-26 20:07:42 Post subject: 参观南京总统府感触二首

其一长江路上彩霞飘，总统府前声浪高，游客纷纷排队入，鲜花束束向云抛；存心摄影争前位，着意留言启后艘，民国伤民终不国，独留旗竿见风销！其二历来得胜不容骄，败者终归属自招，八载救亡留剩勇，三年戡乱出溲着，天时民意皆相背，政腐官贪尽失调，四百万军如纸扎，哪堪烈火照天烧！ _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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Posted: 2009-11-26 20:22:30 Post subject:

"败者终归属自招",确有见地! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2009-11-26 21:59:16 Post subject:

以旧作和诗友：七律南京虎踞龙盘建业城，古都风雨六朝京。秦淮河畔笙歌艳，帝王宫中刀剑腥。曲径晨幽灵谷寺，落霞夕照中山陵。一桥飞架越天堑，乐业安居享太平。

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Posted: 2009-11-27 00:58:44 Post subject:

欣赏学习了。 _________________ http://jianghai97.blog.163.com/

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Posted: 2009-11-28 10:09:10 Post subject:

君山楚女 wrote:

其一

长江路上彩霞飘，总统府前声浪高，
游客纷纷排队入，鲜花束束向云抛；
存心摄影争前位，着意留言启后艘，
民国伤民终不国，独留旗竿见风销！

其二

历来得胜不容骄，败者终归属自招，
八载救亡留剩勇，三年戡乱出溲着，
天时民意皆相背，政腐官贪尽失调，
四百万军如纸扎，哪堪烈火照天烧！

拜读，欣赏，学习！

君山楚女
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Posted: 2009-11-28 19:54:07 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

"败者终归属自招",确有见地!

谢谢黄先生的支持!我认为国民党是自己打败的。
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学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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Posted: 2009-11-28 19:56:02 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

以旧作和诗友：
...

关于南京的诗写得很好，欣赏了，已经收藏。
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学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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Posted: 2009-11-28 19:59:01 Post subject:

李盈枝 wrote:

君山楚女 wrote:

拜读，欣赏，学习！

我常去总统府和明故宫遗址，如读一本王朝没落史。
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学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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