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停电后的开心

山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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Posted: 2009-11-13 07:37:36 Post subject: 停电后的开心

停电后的开心文/ 山城子发展中国家的特征之一谓之停电无计可施后丰盈了我的时间阳台藤摇椅摇着浏览《华语文学五周年诗歌精选》许多的熟识须外国人似地脱帽动作掩藏于意念诗行河水一样奔泻流淌淌到后边的“诗坛感恩”问卷凡十九份细细的聆听一些名诗人被“感恩”或“喜欢” 意外地两处蹦出“山城子” 充数滥竽也开心开颜半溪明月的提及只是我回帖时曾坦然诚然穆桂荣的带出是激励我“贴近生活”留连掩卷静思忽两句话扑楞楞飞上蓝天一是继续交流率直二是让生活天天活脱为语言 2009-11-13 于贵阳市金阳新区 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

nightingale2
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Posted: 2009-11-17 11:31:24 Post subject:

顺口溜么，缺乏浪漫诗意。用了太多的叙述性字词的，是散文诗，不是诗歌哦，大伯

山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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Posted: 2009-11-19 00:47:57 Post subject:

谢谢朋友的指点！！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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