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怀慈父

米运刚
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Posted: 2009-11-12 20:35:02 Post subject: 怀慈父

怀慈父金风绕桂拍樨棂，隐隐慈父唤儿声。鳏居半世莲子泪，茕立三秋竹节心。卷阅昏灯当至乐，烟熏病体为贻情。平生只愿江边月，朗照幼鸿沐甘霖。

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Posted: 2009-11-12 22:11:51 Post subject:

父慈子孝。

米运刚
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Posted: 2009-11-13 06:30:59 Post subject:

谢谢庆宏兄！我真正感受到了“谁言寸草心，报得三春晖”。慈父不到30岁就鳏居，苦苦守着一个不成才不成器的弱婴。吃过的苦，受过的罪，蓝天作纸海水作墨也难以书尽。每每想起这些，我就难以平静。唉！慈父已去，要报答，已是不能够的了。

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Posted: 2009-11-13 20:42:54 Post subject:

父爱重如山，舔犊之情倾今生之力，又何以报之一二。拜读了。 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2009-11-13 21:33:19 Post subject:

谢谢勿妄言君，十分赞同。

米运刚
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Posted: 2009-11-13 21:33:47 Post subject:

谢谢勿妄言君，十分赞同。

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Posted: 2009-11-15 02:20:20 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

怀慈父
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五十六言，字字是情。
兄台至孝，家慈至爱，可钦可敬！
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米运刚
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Posted: 2009-11-15 06:01:11 Post subject:

谢谢方天兄雅评。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-11-15 19:03:50 Post subject:

百行孝為先! 运刚孝心可嘉! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-11-16 20:43:24 Post subject:

怀念慈父,感人至深! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2009-11-18 15:04:16 Post subject:

字字句句都是情，学习!

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Posted: 2010-02-01 17:20:16 Post subject:

大爱无疆，高山仰止。在下敬仰先生。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-01 19:37:21 Post subject:

米兄至孝感人!

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Posted: 2010-02-03 22:50:15 Post subject:

感人！蜡炬惜成灰，子孝诚可慰。

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Posted: 2010-02-04 06:49:34 Post subject:

谢谢白云、黄洋界、冰清、南城、笑聊、老山六位先生品评。

月映春江
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Posted: 2010-02-11 18:49:48 Post subject: 问好

读了您的《怀慈父》，感情真挚，令人感动！祝您虎年吉祥！

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