齐遂林
秀才
Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 158
齐遂林Collection |
 Posted: 2009-11-15 20:49:17 Post subject: 雪 |
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我约朔风天庭落，轻纱素裹访梅林。
位高空惹媚家赋，身贱尽得冰玉魂。
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潦草山水狂写意，箭羽横空癫精神。
花开春暖丽日里，袅娜叩开谁家门？
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
| Posted: 2009-11-15 21:33:32 Post subject: |
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豪放,寫意!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
| Posted: 2009-11-15 21:57:56 Post subject: |
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遂林诗友咏雪好诗。以旧韵和之：
七绝 咏雪
飘飘玉雪九天来，善舞多姿满目开。
大地春回冰化尽，香魂一缕返瑶台。 |
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米运刚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
米运刚Collection |
| Posted: 2009-11-16 05:34:06 Post subject: |
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| 豪放的咏雪诗，更喜第一首。 |
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