| 为萧云 童生
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-11-12 02:03:31    Post subject: 七律  咏梅 |   |  
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				| 七律  咏梅 严冬风袭未残衰, 傲骨迎寒独自开.
 从不卑微沉底谷, 也无吹捧上高台.
 冰天送艳姿长盛, 雪地飘香歌满怀.
 劣境难催枝上绿, 坚贞只为报春来.
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		| 米运刚 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 19 Mar 2009
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 Location: 四川省德阳市
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				|  Posted: 2009-11-12 03:38:36    Post subject: |   |  
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				| “从不卑微沉底谷,”人,就应该自信,不必“上高台”,但更不能“沉底谷”。问好! |  | 
	
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-11-12 11:28:09    Post subject: |   |  
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 读诗友咏梅诗,以旧作和之:
 
 五律 暗香梅
 
 幽谷暗香卉,诗裁画里栽。
 无心逐世染,有志傲霜开。
 瑞雪伴轻舞,寒冰砌玉台。
 香魂春隐去,余韵久徘徊。
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 七绝 异乡梅
 --远离故土的奋斗者
 
 枝梅辗转到天涯,
 历尽寒辛始有芽。
 雪冻风催香犹在,
 身披秀色傲春花。
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 五绝 题梅花
 
 迎风伴雪开。
 梅送暗香来,
 傲骨寒中立,
 题诗好素材。
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		| 为萧云 童生
 
 
 Joined: 22 Aug 2009
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				|  Posted: 2009-11-17 01:46:46    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 感谢两位朋友 |  | 
	
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		| 冰清 同进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-11-18 14:56:17    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 梅格梅魂俱在! |  | 
	
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		| 为萧云 童生
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-11-22 17:47:32    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢朋友 |  | 
	
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