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我的灵魂正在缩短

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-11-10 19:17:54 Post subject: 我的灵魂正在缩短

我的灵魂正在缩短周道模我的灵魂从一匹砖走到另一匹砖，走到了长城的长度。我的灵魂从一滴水流到另一滴水，流到了长江的长度。人类从直立行走以来，我的灵魂就开始奔跑，奔跑到了地球赤道的长度。可我的灵魂也在痛苦地缩短：一条皱纹抽我一尺灵魂，一根白发扯我一尺灵魂，我的灵魂正在缩短痛苦。我的灵魂正在快乐地缩短：一首诗歌吮我一丈灵魂，一篇散文吞我一丈灵魂，我的灵魂正在缩短快乐。长城开始缩短，终将缩成一匹砖。长江开始缩短，终将缩成一滴水。人类的未来开始缩短，终将缩成一个化石的头骨。地球的赤道也开始缩短，终将缩成上帝的一个指环。我的灵魂早就开始缩短，终将缩成一寸痛苦，缩成万丈欢乐！当我缩短着终归于零时，我的灵魂在我的作品中踩着一个一个的字，就像长城登着一匹一匹的砖，长江踏着一滴一滴的水，人类走着一年一年的路程，精进，歌唱，飘忽，向着虚无的长！ 2009-11-5上午阳光中 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-11-12 03:16:12 Post subject:

灵魂快乐了，与“诗歌”与“散文”交融成一个整体了，其实已经延伸了，延伸为历史，延伸为上帝的指环了。这是许多人梦寐以求却又一生一世也难以达到的哟。为灵魂“快乐地缩短”而欢呼祝贺！

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Posted: 2009-11-12 03:26:59 Post subject:

感谢米兄的热情鼓励！问好！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-11-12 03:31:25 Post subject:

昨天的短信收到了吗？

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-11-12 03:34:27 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

昨天的短信收到了吗？

收到，去罗江学习、祝贺你！
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William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-12-01 08:23:56 Post subject:

对有些词句进行了修改，请方家提意见。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2010-01-17 05:59:05 Post subject:

奇特的想象，成就了诗意，欣赏！

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Posted: 2010-01-30 23:15:27 Post subject:

一首唱给生命的哀怨之歌！欣赏。 _________________ 感谢我的太阳每天如约升起……

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Posted: 2010-02-06 10:05:36 Post subject:

是內心的歌唱,靈魂在呻吟,吟哦出美妙的感受. 告訴它正在蛻變中,也許由小蟲化成蝴蝶飛上青天. 很美妙的詩但歌...快要登峰造極了.. 好呀,好! _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

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Posted: 2010-02-10 22:53:49 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

奇特的想象，成就了诗意，欣赏！

谢谢荷梦君的欣赏和鼓励！我代表春天问候你！
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Posted: 2010-02-21 01:56:12 Post subject:

再读，学习！

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Posted: 2010-02-21 01:57:45 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

荷梦 wrote:

奇特的想象，成就了诗意，欣赏！

谢谢荷梦君的欣赏和鼓励！我代表春天问候你！

呵呵，你的灵魂已经缩短成了春天么？

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2010-02-23 07:15:10 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

奇特的想象，成就了诗意，欣赏！

感谢荷梦的欣赏和鼓励！新春好!
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William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2010-04-16 14:16:56 Post subject:

张南城 wrote:

一首唱给生命的哀怨之歌！欣赏。

谢谢张君的读赏！春天好！
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Posted: 2011-01-30 18:58:55 Post subject:

種讀優美散文詩. _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

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Posted: 2011-03-24 22:19:42 Post subject:

sfiawong wrote:

種讀優美散文詩.

谢谢先生的再次光临！春天的问候！
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