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云儿

郑达夫
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Posted: 2009-08-03 18:32:03 Post subject: 云儿

云儿偷来几朵白云悄悄、轻轻―― 捧在掌上 ---柔软、温馨生怕被她逃逸拿根丝线绑住心里笑她 ---顽劣、娉婷裁剪几朵彩云如花、似芯挂上墙壁 ----绽蕾、沁馨生怕被它飘去拿根丝线系着心里怜她 ---欲笑、还颦 _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

杨海军
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Posted: 2009-08-04 10:42:43 Post subject:

清新小诗。不错。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

袁春春
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Posted: 2009-08-04 11:56:36 Post subject:

有云儿的轻盈。

郑达夫
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Posted: 2009-08-04 15:36:53 Post subject:

谢谢先生阅批! _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

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Posted: 2009-08-04 22:08:57 Post subject:

很清新可愛,有點像古人寫的賦! 喜歡! _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

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Posted: 2009-11-10 05:46:30 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

清新小诗。不错。

谢谢先生鼓励～～
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郑达夫
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Posted: 2009-11-10 05:46:54 Post subject:

袁春春 wrote:

有云儿的轻盈。

谢谢先生鼓励～～
_________________
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我的QQ： 450895168
我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

郑达夫
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Posted: 2009-11-10 05:48:30 Post subject:

袁春春 wrote:

有云儿的轻盈。

问候朋友～～
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Posted: 2009-11-10 05:49:00 Post subject:

sfiawong wrote:

很清新可愛,有點像古人寫的賦!

喜歡!

问候～～
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我的QQ： 450895168
我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

郑达夫
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Posted: 2010-02-02 04:26:22 Post subject:

sfiawong wrote:

很清新可愛,有點像古人寫的賦!

喜歡!

谢谢鼓励~~
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我的QQ： 450895168
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