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打碗花

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-03-12 16:30:52 Post subject: 打碗花

打碗花我看见醒来的打碗花她们在清晨的风中歪斜着身子顺着石人河边一路奔跑到三姐的屋前多年前我曾爱上其中一朵粉色的让我哄好了哭泣的二亮妹妹我也曾仇恨那朵红色的她长在三姐的篱笆边我弄碎时被她骂了一句回家还打破了一只花边细瓷碗又挨了父亲一耳光点七爷说弄坏一朵打碗花就会打破一只碗那是你爹一天的工钱我的博客：月光之袂 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751#

和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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Posted: 2007-03-12 22:04:54 Post subject:

情节生动 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-03-13 02:57:07 Post subject:

谢诗人。祝好！！！！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

三色堇
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Joined: 25 Nov 2006
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Posted: 2007-03-13 03:01:19 Post subject:

很能触动人的诗歌,问好.

杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2007-03-13 03:33:05 Post subject:

谢三色堇诗人，我在慧峰处看见了你《长安大歌》只是让韩少君抢去了。那本书真好！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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Posted: 2007-03-13 04:58:39 Post subject:

问好~学习

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-03-13 05:41:26 Post subject:

不要客气，相互提高。祝好！！！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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