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秋日即事
豆青虫
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PostPosted: 2009-10-23 02:59:39    Post subject: 秋日即事 Reply with quote

秋日即事(外一首)

金风穿竹柳啼鸦,倚户看山日渐斜。
小圃红芳凋落尽,东篱菊吐一丛花。

落 叶
秋风一夜改颜色,片片飘飞没野蹊。
但使来年花烂熳,此身甘愿化春泥。
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2009-10-23 09:02:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

东篱菊吐一丛花,好一幅秋图!
此身甘愿化春泥,很有化作春泥更护花之味!
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2009-10-23 13:42:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏第一首。更喜“小圃红芳凋落尽,东篱菊吐一丛花”鲜明的反衬。
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豆青虫
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PostPosted: 2009-10-23 21:44:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白云,冰清二位老师的雅赏!
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野航
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PostPosted: 2009-10-28 17:03:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一首流畅婉转.好
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2009-10-28 20:44:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋日如画景,山乡田园诗。
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老山
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PostPosted: 2009-10-31 08:57:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
欣赏第一首。更喜“小圃红芳凋落尽,东篱菊吐一丛花”鲜明的反衬。


有同感,“东篱菊吐一丛花”卓尔不俗。
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