豆青虫 童生
Joined: 23 Oct 2009 Posts: 5
豆青虫Collection |
Posted: 2009-10-23 02:59:39 Post subject: 秋日即事 |
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秋日即事(外一首)
金风穿竹柳啼鸦,倚户看山日渐斜。
小圃红芳凋落尽,东篱菊吐一丛花。
落 叶
秋风一夜改颜色,片片飘飞没野蹊。
但使来年花烂熳,此身甘愿化春泥。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2009-10-23 09:02:56 Post subject: |
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东篱菊吐一丛花,好一幅秋图!
此身甘愿化春泥,很有化作春泥更护花之味! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2009-10-23 13:42:39 Post subject: |
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欣赏第一首。更喜“小圃红芳凋落尽,东篱菊吐一丛花”鲜明的反衬。 |
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豆青虫 童生
Joined: 23 Oct 2009 Posts: 5
豆青虫Collection |
Posted: 2009-10-23 21:44:07 Post subject: |
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谢谢白云,冰清二位老师的雅赏! |
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野航 秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 547 Location: toronto 野航Collection |
Posted: 2009-10-28 17:03:32 Post subject: |
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第一首流畅婉转.好 _________________ 回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2009-10-28 20:44:30 Post subject: |
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秋日如画景,山乡田园诗。 |
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老山 秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 319
老山Collection |
Posted: 2009-10-31 08:57:14 Post subject: |
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冰清 wrote: |
欣赏第一首。更喜“小圃红芳凋落尽,东篱菊吐一丛花”鲜明的反衬。 |
有同感,“东篱菊吐一丛花”卓尔不俗。 |
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