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十八岁的凝望
佳毅
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PostPosted: 2009-10-30 00:01:03    Post subject: 十八岁的凝望 Reply with quote


那嘹亮的歌声
在这
如花的季节
伴着
窗外皎洁的月光

挽起了青春的手臂
十八岁
我开始凝望
凝望每一个
眼睛所及角落
寻找
奔跑中遗失的美好
路太漫长
望不到尽头的灯塔
仿佛水手
永远的惜别了最亲的海岸
置身小舟
飘荡在一片悄寂的海域
看庭前花开花落
换不回
花枝几许尘埃
十八年的沉浮起落
十八年的独自漂泊
红尘烟雨中
遗留下多少梦
何时才能走出那阴霾的年代
生命中
充满了疑问
解不开的心结
压制着呼吸
是一种
对往事的恋恋回味
是一次次
受伤后不肯低头的执着
不愿承认
自己错了
只想知道所有的付出是否值得
十八年
用泪水洗涤的心灵
十八年
是痛苦萦绕在心间
追逐天使的路上
折断了
那对为爱而生的翅膀
忘记了天空
放弃了自由的飞翔
还是那个夜的月光
冰冷
凄凉
让人有些忧伤
北方的天空上
就连星星也流下了眼泪
十八岁
我在星空下
凝望
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PostPosted: 2009-10-30 07:37:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

十八岁 , 正是诗歌的季节。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-30 09:32:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

恩,多凝炼下~
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PostPosted: 2009-10-30 19:38:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

我去新浪加你好友啦 加不上啊
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上城
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PostPosted: 2009-11-04 04:15:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

十八岁 好啊。永远回不去了
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