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迭前韵
寒江雪影
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PostPosted: 2009-10-28 09:35:47    Post subject: 迭前韵 Reply with quote

迭前韵再酬      
既向征人赋别忱 
还从网路报知音 
三生织就文缘丽 
一往同潜学海深 
天地有情存白首 
光阴无碍拥丹心 
诗声听与香尘混 
疑是彤云翥凤吟 
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野航
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PostPosted: 2009-10-28 17:00:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

天地有情存白首 
光阴无碍拥丹心 
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回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统
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PostPosted: 2009-10-28 20:45:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

野航 wrote:
天地有情存白首 
光阴无碍拥丹心 


好句。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-30 01:53:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢结尾的韵味。
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