寒江雪影 童生
Joined: 12 Jun 2008 Posts: 43
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Posted: 2009-10-28 09:35:47 Post subject: 迭前韵 |
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迭前韵再酬
既向征人赋别忱
还从网路报知音
三生织就文缘丽
一往同潜学海深
天地有情存白首
光阴无碍拥丹心
诗声听与香尘混
疑是彤云翥凤吟 _________________ "課虛無以責有, 叩寂寞而求音。" |
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野航 秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 547 Location: toronto 野航Collection |
Posted: 2009-10-28 17:00:29 Post subject: |
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天地有情存白首
光阴无碍拥丹心 _________________ 回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2009-10-28 20:45:27 Post subject: |
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野航 wrote: |
天地有情存白首
光阴无碍拥丹心 |
好句。 |
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杨光 秀才
Joined: 01 Jun 2006 Posts: 683
杨光Collection |
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