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《一个人的地老天荒》（组诗）/边井
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PostPosted: 2009-10-26 22:06:41    Post subject: 《一个人的地老天荒》（组诗）/边井 Reply with quote
《一个人的地老天荒》（组诗）/边井

《月台》

沿铁道的轨迹
月台
送走多少离别
守候多少岁月
风雨中
一层锈迹剥落
我看见里面的芯
没变 如同当初的
离别

《铁轨》

顺着记忆的方向
一条铁轨
通向轰隆隆的过去
那时的爱情
还没熟 羞答答的果实上
刻着两个人的地老天荒

《动车》

时速两百五十公里每小时
这是显示屏告诉我的
回不去了
再快的速度也枉然
无缝轨道上
找不回当年轰隆隆的感觉
离记忆很近了
月台没变
只是再也找不到当年的那列火车

2009/10/24午
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PostPosted: 2009-10-27 06:03:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
我看见里面的芯
没变 如同当初的
离别

很诗意！
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PostPosted: 2009-10-28 07:08:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
感谢老乡的认真点评与指导！：）
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