米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
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Location: 四川省德阳市
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 Posted: 2009-10-19 02:58:50 Post subject: 鹊桥仙•旌湖畔款老友 |
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鹊桥仙•旌湖畔款老友
流风兴浓，凝波情厚，兰棹蹒跚碎步。杯飞水面化浮沤，醉酣那闲鸥散鹭。
川原渺杳，天山料峭，廿载疏星难数。幸遇瑶池快意舟，泪湿透寒阳秋露。 |
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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| Posted: 2009-10-19 05:20:25 Post subject: |
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"兴浓.情厚.醉酣.快意舟" --- 且看,君与友,情谊厚
"渺杳.料峭.秋露.泪湿透寒" --- 喜遇中却暗帶伤感!
曲名还著意选用<鹊桥仙>!
运刚,此词情感丰富且委婉!!
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米运刚
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| Posted: 2009-10-20 08:55:50 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢白云兄雅评。老友一别，廿年才又重逢，老泪纵横，伤感在所难免。 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2009-10-20 10:12:16 Post subject: |
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运刚,是呀!人的一生又有多少个廿年?又有多少个深交老友?
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又一方天
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Joined: 16 Nov 2006
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| Posted: 2009-10-20 18:42:57 Post subject: |
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泪湿透寒阳秋露。
拜读、赞赏！
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米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
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Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-10-21 09:12:39 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢兄台雅评。 |
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宁家珍
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Joined: 20 May 2009
Posts: 470
Location: 中国黄山
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| Posted: 2009-10-22 06:57:32 Post subject: To 米运刚先生 |
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| 欣赏佳词，问候朋友。 |
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