又一方天
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 Posted: 2009-10-18 13:32:02 Post subject: 《中秋.致农民工》（八片之一之二） |
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《中秋.致农民工》（八片之一）
炎做风雨凉做霜，手下何处不沧桑。
随任乱剪窗前月，添瓣桂花便生香。
《中秋.致农民工》（八片之二）
纸污醉态金灿糜，笙吹日堕歌月西。
几把尘帚扫腐气，一瓢清水洗晨曦。
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米运刚
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| Posted: 2009-10-19 03:01:57 Post subject: |
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| 好诗，喜爱“几把尘帚扫腐气，一瓢清水洗晨曦。” |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2009-10-19 05:05:19 Post subject: |
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"隨任乱剪窗前月,添瓣桂花便生香". 好句!!
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2009-10-19 05:46:21 Post subject: |
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| 风雨炎凉农民工，几时得见九州同。 |
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又一方天
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| Posted: 2009-10-19 15:33:35 Post subject: |
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三位老师雅评，一并鸣谢！拜上！
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