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归还
狼孩
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PostPosted: 2009-10-17 20:26:44    Post subject: 归还 Reply with quote

把太阳还给天空

把美梦还给黑夜

把鲜花还给清风

剩下的属于你



把和平还给战争

把眼泪还给大海

把爱情还给家

剩下的属于你



把别离还给时间

把死亡还给坟茔

把笑容还给涟漪

剩下的属于你



把颜色还给画布

把酒还给高粱

把茶还给大树

剩下的属于你



把陶瓷还给泥土

把火还给煤

把路还给山

剩下的属于你



把广场还给牛羊

把白云还给鸟

把诗歌还给语言

剩下的属于你



把孩子还给人类

把爱人还给小说

把父母还给历史

剩下的属于你



把衣服还给季节

把思想还给雕塑

把身体还给上帝

剩下的属于你



把天赐的归还给天

把骗来的归还给良心

把抢来的归还给正义

剩下的属于你



把该归还的全部归还

你只是剩下的躯壳

吃人饭说人话

当然拉的也是人屎



剩下的全都属于你

思想飞不上天

身体入不了地

就像地球上一块破补丁
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2009-10-18 02:40:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

把美梦还给黑夜

把鲜花还给清风
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安红红
同进士出身


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PostPosted: 2009-10-18 15:58:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

把该归还的全部归还

你只是剩下的躯壳

吃人饭说人话

当然拉的也是人屎


个人建议这~~~以上段可以不要~~只截接下面一断~~整首诗有力度有深度~~
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