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▲▲▲曾经的山势
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PostPosted: 2009-10-15 21:19:28    Post subject: ▲▲▲曾经的山势 Reply with quote

▲▲▲曾经的山势
文/ 山城子

1、
曾经的山势,别家不曾有的山势
曾蜿蜒绵延十三个年头
名贵的电视连续剧一样
依然在我的心头影像

2、
没想到,她很是美术
嚓嚓嚓粉笔娴熟一株茂盛大树
回过头来
笑着说这是我国农业,接着红圈太阳
说光合作用联产计酬
然后简笔科技水肥等,都丝丝入扣
她眼睫毛很长忽闪着不是谈经五鹿
是我激发她自己创作的一段乐谱

3、
他俩想不到突然要当老农民
无奈她点了名,且角落里临时导演
她指定一个没买,一个买了保险
结果就当堂“失火”了,她改扮理赔员
现场一口一个“老大爷”地叫
一个微笑感言,一个珠泪涟涟
我肯定没这招数,因而十分动了情感
喷涌文字溅湿了《人民教育》散文专栏

4、
第三个俩小辫的她,极会讲故事
没站稳讲台就宣布她是个海外大老板
回乡投资给乡亲们讲讲如何白手起家
然后如何黑手榨取雇用工人的血汗
矛盾激化时罢工者堵门砸玻璃
她立刻黑板擦电话警察局前来镇压
嘎然而止。她匆忙回座小跑
陡起的雷鸣声一直响到《贵州教育报》

5、
下课了,从不拖课的我却走不脱
高考前的复习学校统一订的试卷
我让他们自答后互对答案
有不同则立刻互相讨论分辨
总是要全班集中到某一个难题上
就互不服气脸红脖子粗地争辩
我不打断,铃声也打不断
但我不能走开,等他们终于求援

6、
那些活泼的事依然在记忆里开花结果
曾经的山势只能在心里默默触摸

2009-10-16
于贵阳市金阳新区
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PostPosted: 2009-10-16 02:44:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

写成散文诗似乎更好。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-16 17:26:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

赏读佳作!
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PostPosted: 2009-10-16 17:59:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

记忆是一种像蛇一样,蜿蜒
“那些活泼的事依然在记忆里开花结果
曾经的山势只能在心里默默触摸 ”
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PostPosted: 2009-11-24 09:20:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

那些活泼的事依然在记忆里开花结果
曾经的山势只能在心里默默触摸
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