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每天一点点

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Posted: 2009-08-13 23:42:49 Post subject: 每天一点点

每天一点点看着你的脸每天一点点爱上你的眼每天一点点你的痴心我的无心每天一点点你的无心我的痴心每天一点点蜻蜓行水每天一点点小荷才露每天一点点花重重影重重每天一点点给了的思念，—— 是这么少而你添来的又这么多 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2009-08-16 01:02:44 Post subject:

总计一十六点。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2009-08-19 22:59:44 Post subject:

想压韵，没压上 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2009-08-20 03:44:59 Post subject: 这是在反拍上押韵，像周杰伦。

上城 wrote:

想压韵，没压上

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Posted: 2009-08-20 07:17:43 Post subject:

一点点穿石，一点点成海

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Posted: 2009-08-20 09:39:29 Post subject:

很久没看见这么好玩儿的东东了谁说不押韵啦，统统压着呢！

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Posted: 2009-08-29 20:49:01 Post subject: 我想的你咋都知道呢

悠子 wrote:

一点点穿石，一点点成海

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Posted: 2009-08-29 21:12:14 Post subject:

七小姐 wrote:

很久没看见这么好玩儿的东东了

谁说不押韵啦，统统压着呢！

本小姐真是冰雪聪明。我是想一韵到底，中途不换韵

问好您
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Posted: 2009-08-29 21:17:07 Post subject: 不是很懂周的歌

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

上城 wrote:

想压韵，没压上

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Posted: 2009-10-15 04:49:57 Post subject:

小荷尖尖，细雨如酥就这么一点点其实一点点最好，都没浪费，比大雨滂沱好。。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-10-16 03:23:29 Post subject:

红袖添乱 wrote:

小荷尖尖，细雨如酥就这么一点点
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