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双调 蟾宫曲 秋昏
米运刚
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PostPosted: 2009-10-12 03:58:43    Post subject: 双调 蟾宫曲 秋昏 Reply with quote

双调 蟾宫曲 秋昏
萦回韵里秋风,雾锁兰台,倩影朦胧。琴轻瑟重,有时呢喃,有时叮咚。
王家女去了塞外,孙小姑回了江东,唯余惊鸿。凭般苍凉,也觅春虹?
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PostPosted: 2009-10-12 23:45:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

苍凉之意尽在曲中。学习。
凭——疑为“恁”
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春风沐惠,秋月怀清。
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米运刚
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PostPosted: 2009-10-13 03:56:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢一壶先生,的是笔误。
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2009-10-13 15:00:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗写时代,古诗能否反映我们生活的这个时代?值得探索。
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米运刚
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PostPosted: 2009-10-14 03:17:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个问题的答案应该是肯定的。无论新诗旧诗,都只是形式,反映时代的,关键是内容。内容若陈旧了,即使再新潮的诗歌,也不能反映日新月异的时代日新月异的生活。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-14 05:56:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

很赞同运刚之说! 古诗与新诗,是形式之分,能否反映時代生活,那是内容之关键! 只要能把鲜活的時代气息与优美的艺术形式融合起來,那就是一篇精彩之作. 经过华夏千年诗史的精彩与广博的历程,也充分反映出唐宋诗詞是出色的艺术形式,只要能赋于其生动的時代脉搏与精美的艺术手法,那么唐宋诗詞这一古典的艺朮形式,一定会再放出灿烂的光彩!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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米运刚
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PostPosted: 2009-10-15 03:06:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

当今,读旧体诗词的人越多了,究其原因,一方面大概是韵律更优美更能上口咏唱;二则,也许旧体诗词较之现代诗反而易懂一些(一人的猜测)。我不反对现代诗,我也写作过并出了两个小本子,说实在的,我更偏爱旧体诗词一些。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-15 08:40:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

與运刚同感! 唐宋詩詞抑揚頓挫,聲韻悠揚,在历史长河里,大浪淘沙,得以承傳與發展.
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PostPosted: 2009-10-21 09:19:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢道模兄提出问题供诗友思索,谢谢白云兄附议!
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PostPosted: 2009-10-22 06:58:54    Post subject: To 米运刚先生 Reply with quote

欣赏佳作,问候朋友。
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2009-10-23 20:19:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

非常赞同米兄、白云兄的意见。

记得聂绀弩先生曾有不少融口语、俗语、俚语和新语汇于古体诗词的生动、诙谐、传神的作品,被人们视为开创了旧体新诗之先河的。如《清厕同枚子》“君自舀来我自挑,燕赵台畔雨潇潇。高低深浅两双手,香臭稠稀一把瓢。白雪阳春同掩鼻,苍蝇盛夏共弯腰。澄清天下吾曹事,污秽成坑岂肯饶?”这首我就特别喜欢。其语言纯清、用典自如,寄寓深切,堪称脍炙人口、引人深思之作。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-24 08:40:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

有同感,谢谢冰清先生。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-24 20:38:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

无论论新诗旧诗,都只是形式,反映时代的,关键是内容。
》赞同,有益的探讨,!
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