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钗头凤 中秋感怀
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PostPosted: 2009-10-08 02:07:43    Post subject: 钗头凤 中秋感怀 Reply with quote

婵娟旧,人空瘦。

泪痕常伴心伤漏。

城春短,欢情浅。

一腔柔绪,数年愁漫。

怨!怨!怨!



秋凉久,休回首。

比邻犹似天涯走。

寻思遍,华年远。

且如虫鸟,管它寒暖。

啭!啭!啭!
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PostPosted: 2009-10-08 04:44:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

好一首情丰感深之钗头凤!
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PostPosted: 2009-10-08 05:46:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

有陆放翁之风。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-10 04:45:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

“泪痕常伴心伤漏。”“邻犹似天涯走。”君何以如此凄情? 祝君清秋开心!
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PostPosted: 2009-10-10 15:09:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

深秋虽无荷花开,中年红日照样升。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-11 01:35:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位关爱!
一时心伤,好在时间能慢慢排解。今后的日子,我尝试着“如虫鸟,管它寒暖。 啭!啭!啭!”
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PostPosted: 2009-10-11 03:05:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

人生在世,可苦可伤心的事常有,可喜可开心的事更多,常常想到此,就会好许多。祝君天天开心!
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