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孤雪
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Posted: 2009-10-06 19:03:33 Post subject: 一杯清茶

一杯清茶茶，静物之上的静物遇水，随波翻飞把春的另一头拴住。爱要留给自己吗？不昨日，你还流连枝头集蓄满腹阳光。别出声我知道，你的爱如同七月流火，纷纷而落不带半点杂质，让我的忧心不再归来 2009.10.05 朝着地平线走去日月递转朝着地平线的方向当生活被分裂狼群撕咬着北方之北风吐着废气胃口饥饿久违了，眷恋刑场上的囚徒拖着空空的躯体将幸福埋藏于树下憧憬封上梦的标签我去了在另一个世界只待一声春雷炸碎虚脱的影子你还会站在那个发光的地方吗开一朵新生的花 2009.10.07 群临屏接龙镌刻明天镌刻。这寂静的山岭一个叛逆者，涉水而来不提伤痛，不提荒芜生命中那盏灯亮着明天，或许是块坚硬的花岗或许是片柔软的水域我不过是只叛逆的虫子而我的萤光会点燃燎原之火山石，野草，河流，飞瀑以及明天之明日都会被我的火焰镌刻成一块块永久的丰碑 2009.10.07

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赵福治
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Posted: 2009-10-07 03:14:08 Post subject:

你还会站在那个发光的地方吗开一朵新生的花。。。诗意无处不在。

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孤雪
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Posted: 2009-10-07 19:00:46 Post subject:

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赵福治 wrote:

你还会
站在那个发光的地方吗
开一朵新生的花
。。。诗意无处不在。

赵老师多指点啊

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-10-07 19:39:42 Post subject:

我不过是只叛逆的虫子而我的萤光会点燃燎原之火喜欢的句子，欢迎多来~

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孤雪
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Posted: 2009-10-08 02:43:32 Post subject:

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我不过是只叛逆的虫子
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问明月好！多批呢！

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安红红
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Posted: 2009-10-08 23:45:34 Post subject:

诗歌是柔软的~却总能读出光芒~~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2009-10-10 15:08:01 Post subject:

有诗质感。提读。

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孤雪
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Posted: 2009-10-10 16:13:03 Post subject:

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安红红 wrote:

诗歌是柔软的~却总能读出光芒~~

问好~

问红红好！

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Posted: 2009-10-10 16:13:50 Post subject:

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风动 wrote:

有诗质感。提读。

多谢风动鼓励！

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孔令滨
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Posted: 2009-10-10 18:50:20 Post subject:

同意楼上观点。情真意切的诗行！ _________________ 能够交心的地方不必在乎有多远，只要相信诗是亲近所得，倾心所得，用简单的文字诉最深最真的情！【80后】

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孤雪
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Posted: 2009-10-15 03:50:48 Post subject:

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孔令滨 wrote:

同意楼上观点。情真意切的诗行！

握握~~问好！

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