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荧火●渔火●星火等
南国杜鹃
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Joined: 19 Jul 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-10-10 04:29:40    Post subject: 荧火●渔火●星火等 Reply with quote

夜色如同砒霜
撒在行人的目光上
是有一条路通向远方
那里四季分明
荧虫的光太暗
那种谦和低于芦花
低于地平线
渔夫正忙碌得失去自我
有谁去较真是不是渔火的过错
看星星又照常升起了
在那个巍峨的山顶
云烟是它们的崇高的面纱
但是,它们只能照亮梦境
夜行、夜行、我们必须夜行
那些被心灵反复推敲的词章
才是一盏盏渐渐明亮的提灯
正用白扁豆的清香去阐述一个传说

2009-10-10布谷于苏州
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风动
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PostPosted: 2009-10-10 15:19:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

有气势,但语言有硬伤。个见。提给大家读。
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