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月亮，我不再把你仰望

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-10-05 01:03:24 Post subject: 月亮，我不再把你仰望

《秋天，梦醒了》早就看到，即便是春也无法企及所有的等待只是，在书本的喂养下我宁愿迷信那些唯心的豪言一直执着一场虚幻的梦期盼秋天有丰硕的果趟过一路艰辛，终于走到秋，才知道沉坠一个梦，与认清一个人其实不需要别的时间，时间就足矣只是，人不是草木没有后一个可以重新开始的四季 2009-10-02 《月亮，我不再把你仰望》从混沌到清醒，你已经远离神奇掀开你如银的纱衣低于-180℃的荒芜留不住怀抱玉兔的嫦娥月亮，我不再把你仰望我不再在乎你的圆缺不再一厢情愿地潮涨潮落今后，我只关注手中的镜子照自己，照前路 2009-10-04

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Posted: 2009-10-05 03:04:04 Post subject:

生动而有感染力！！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-10-11 01:19:11 Post subject:

一些随感，谢谢评阅！问好！

骨笛
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Posted: 2009-10-11 16:34:35 Post subject:

走到秋，才知道沉坠一个梦，与认清一个人其实不需要别的时间，时间就足矣 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-10-12 02:20:19 Post subject:

一直执着一场虚幻的梦期盼秋天有丰硕的果问好秋荷~

张南城
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Posted: 2009-10-12 04:33:05 Post subject:

喜欢你的话语。自信向前，大道如天……

安红红
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Posted: 2009-10-12 07:35:24 Post subject:

率真的情绪表达~读这两首诗，很符合自已现在的心境~~ 写得洒脱~~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-10-17 02:08:01 Post subject:

骨笛 wrote:

走到秋，才知道
...

问好！

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-10-17 02:08:58 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

一直执着一场虚幻的梦
期盼秋天有丰硕的果

问好秋荷~

梦永远只是梦，但人不可能不做梦。
明月好！

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-10-17 22:17:19 Post subject:

张南城 wrote:

喜欢你的话语。
自信向前，大道如天……

谢谢你的喜欢！谢谢你的鼓励！问好！

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-10-17 22:18:40 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

率真的情绪表达~读这两首诗，很符合自已现在的心境~~
写得洒脱~~

问好~

握手~~~为心境的相合！

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