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更漏子六月十九夜

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-08-16 17:14:33 Post subject: 更漏子六月十九夜

夜阑深，月藏影，旧怨更添新病。一帘叹，意难平，几番清泪零？春去久，莫对镜，梦醒那堪形冷？不如睡，待天明，卧听晨鸟鸣。

米运刚
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Posted: 2009-08-16 19:37:36 Post subject:

“春去久，莫对镜，梦醒那堪形冷？不如睡，待天明，卧听晨鸟鸣。”好句，荷梦君不会形冷的。拟半片相和“夏风暖，入荷梦，柳丝引回金凤。斜阳外，绿云中，处处友与朋。”问好荷梦君！

冰清
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Posted: 2009-08-25 06:47:52 Post subject:

委婉、含蓄！

是有缘
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Posted: 2009-08-25 22:20:23 Post subject:

欣赏 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-08-30 19:58:56 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

“春去久，莫对镜，梦醒那堪形冷？不如睡，待天明，卧听晨鸟鸣。”好句，荷梦君不会形冷的。拟半片相和“夏风暖，入荷梦，柳丝引回金凤。斜阳外，绿云中，处处友与朋。”问好荷梦君！

谢谢相和，谢谢相慰！回好！

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-08-30 20:04:10 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

委婉、含蓄！

谢评点，问好！

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-08-30 20:06:56 Post subject:

是有缘 wrote:

欣赏

谢谢，问候！

刘献琛
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Posted: 2009-09-05 21:32:23 Post subject:

卧听晨鸟鸣。明天美好。好结。欣赏！

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-09-14 03:44:23 Post subject:

新荷水中梦，听蛙到天明。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-09-23 15:11:30 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

和鸣皆为佳句
荷梦、运刚好诗情
问好颂好文
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冰清
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Posted: 2009-09-24 07:39:00 Post subject:

再读，仍觉意、境都好。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-09-24 10:46:16 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

再读，仍觉意、境都好。

与冰清老师同感。

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-10-05 00:58:47 Post subject:

谢谢朋友们！问好！

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