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剪髮
劉金雄
童生


Joined: 28 Aug 2009
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Location: 台灣桃園
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PostPosted: 2009-09-23 00:37:52    Post subject: 剪髮 Reply with quote

剃刀在頸上約莫幾吋的高度揮舞
你沒有痛的恐懼
也許那兒離心臟太遠
也許那兒太過末梢

髮在你眼前飛落
沒有惋惜
你知道
他還會長回來,而且
免費

突然湧上來的一陣淒涼
不是因為翻飛的落髮
而是
那塊草原地
整理過後才驚覺,依著太陽
穴的角落處迎風開著幾朵
小白花
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迪拜
同进士出身


Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

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PostPosted: 2009-09-24 14:33:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗歌现代

需要细细品读
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戀海
秀才


Joined: 04 Aug 2009
Posts: 383

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PostPosted: 2009-09-27 11:49:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

突然湧上來的一陣淒涼
不是因為翻飛的落髮
而是
那塊草原地
整理過後才驚覺,依著太陽
穴的角落處迎風開著幾朵
小白花

描寫歲月流失的
驚訝與悲涼
從剃髮的觀察中
點滴展示

問好
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博弈
榜眼


Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
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PostPosted: 2009-09-27 12:56:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

金雄这首与以往些显不同,分行‘太阳穴’,
自‘剃刀‘直到’小白花,征象’略见禅味。问好。 Smile
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(在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)
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劉金雄
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Joined: 28 Aug 2009
Posts: 77
Location: 台灣桃園
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PostPosted: 2009-10-07 15:10:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

迪拜 wrote:
诗歌现代

需要细细品读


迪拜日安:

感謝讀詩並請細細品讀!
希望帶給你下午茶的感覺
沒有壓力、悠閒.....

金雄問好!
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劉金雄
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PostPosted: 2009-10-07 15:17:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

戀海 wrote:
突然湧上來的一陣淒涼
...


戀海兄:

剛剪過髮
我對自己頂上的髮一向沒有信心
完全交給師傅如同交給上帝
常常失望的多

但還好,髮量還很多
只是近兩年
太陽穴旁的白髮大量竄出
彷彿要告訴我什麼
我總裝做不知道

金雄問好
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-10-07 15:34:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

岁月沧桑~
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