一壶枫雨
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 Posted: 2009-09-20 02:45:46 Post subject: 【原创】五律·一壶香尘 |
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《五律.一壶香尘》
金桂远秋风，
芬芳任我行。
接天迷月色，
入画醉丹青。
叶瘦花明树，
心香茶静厅。
红尘多少事，
都在一壶中！
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2009-09-20 05:35:20 Post subject: |
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"红尘多少事,都在一壶中".妙句!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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米运刚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-09-21 03:32:31 Post subject: |
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| “红尘多少事，都在一壶中”含义深刻，欣赏！ |
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2009-09-21 05:54:58 Post subject: |
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| 醉眼看尘事，潇洒一壶中。 |
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戴玨
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Joined: 03 Jan 2007
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| Posted: 2009-09-21 11:19:47 Post subject: |
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韻太寬，東韻不應和庚、青韻押一塊的。
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一壶枫雨
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Joined: 06 Mar 2009
Posts: 27
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| Posted: 2009-09-24 19:19:13 Post subject: |
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一并感谢楼上四位！
回复楼上的，俺用的是新韵，通押。哈哈
还有，俺不会说平水话，您若会说，请发音频文件供大家学习。
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