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七绝 枫桥今泊（仄韵）
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PostPosted: 2009-09-22 05:58:14    Post subject: 七绝 枫桥今泊（仄韵） Reply with quote
七绝 枫桥今泊（仄韵）

乘风兰棹下姑苏，夜到枫桥寻古渡。
名刹钟声千载情，当年渔火照今路。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-22 14:18:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
和仄韵詩一首:

一 曲 楓 橋 今 泊 誦 ,
古 唐 韵 味 隨 風 縱 .
慢 吟 細 酌 趣 無 窮 ,
漁 火 鐘 聲 今 古 共 !

請問庆宏君: 首句中,是否應為"兰棹"!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-22 16:17:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
白云闲人 wrote:
和仄韵詩一首:
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谢白云老师和诗！谢白云老师慧眼指正，我敲错了。因为格律要求此处应该用仄声字，故舍“舟”用“棹”。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-22 20:30:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
二位唱和，张继都要起来再叠了 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-09-23 03:38:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
庆宏君客氣了!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-23 03:42:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
秋叶,來和一首好嗎!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-23 06:28:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
“直催”改为“乘风”：

乘风兰棹下姑苏，夜到枫桥寻古渡。
名刹钟声千载情，当年渔火照今路。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-23 08:59:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
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秋叶,來和一首好嗎!


白云兄，不敢啊，张继的《枫桥夜泊》已经空前绝后了。 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2009-09-23 15:05:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
秋叶,太客氣了!
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