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八月桂花香(一组)
辉之宴
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PostPosted: 2009-09-18 21:27:52    Post subject: 八月桂花香(一组) Reply with quote

color=darkred]【八月芬芳】[/color]

她一定就在附近
躲在花香的藤蔓里
熟悉的味道,搂紧我的天空

镜子日益苍老
就像月亮愈来愈年轻
我身体里的草木依然葱茏
糖衣的药片隐瞒着成长的苦痛

今夜,千里之外的八月
是否也打开了香囊
打开一片蔚蓝的海域,波涛汹涌

没有人说话,只有那
秋虫呢哝,飒飒的西风一直向东
遥远被无数次的点击和刷新
那无法显示的网页呵为什么只能藏在心中


【丹桂飘香】

生为八月
香是为了今夜的月亮

就像八月为我的经过而生
月亮必然在今夜拦住我的
马蹄,拦住我的前方

决堤的芬芳,将我拿下
马 没有停,一声长嘶
高亢而绵长


【桂花】

芬芳将窗子打开一条缝
看见月亮也打开了一条缝

她慢慢的打开窗子
月亮也就慢慢的圆了,圆得
像我沿着日子转了一圈又一圈

所有的窗子都打开了
每个人的手上都有一轮金灿灿的月亮


【八月桂花香】

从去年的今天写到今年的今天
我也就写下了这个题目

桂花也是

八月向前挪了一步
我也是

只有那桂花还在原处
只有那芬芳依旧馥郁……

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辉之宴
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PostPosted: 2009-09-18 21:37:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

发重了,烦请编辑删除其一,谢谢 !~

预祝各位中秋快乐!·`
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PostPosted: 2009-09-20 02:36:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

中秋快乐~~

挺喜欢的一组~~意境美好~~

月亮必然在今夜拦住我的
马蹄,拦住
千里之外飘来的花香


镜子日益苍老
就像月亮愈来愈年轻
我身体里的草木依然葱茏
糖衣的药片隐瞒的是成长的苦痛


类似这样的段落~能很快探入内心~

既便拦得住今晚的月光,花香~~我们还是要很快的放它们走~~

问好~~
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辉之宴
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PostPosted: 2009-09-20 22:39:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢老师的赏读,祝中秋快乐!
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