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PostPosted: 2009-09-14 14:21:13    Post subject: 接 口 令 Reply with quote

莫 向 樽 前 惜 沉 醉 ,
可 來 能 飲 一 怀 無 .
照 人 胆 似 秦 時 月 ,
一 片 冰 心 在 玉 壺 !

先借用 "唐.韋莊", "唐.白居易", "清.龔自珍", "唐.王昌龄" 等四位古代詩人的一句詩詞,来組成這一首七绝.
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PostPosted: 2009-09-14 14:39:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

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一 片 冰 心 在 玉 壺 ,
太 平 盛 世 展 鴻 圖 .
民 豐 物 阜 家 家 樂 ,
笑 語 歡 聲 溢 满 途 !
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PostPosted: 2009-09-15 02:05:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

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笑语欢声溢征途,

脚印如星人生殊。

心有荷花情有梦,

扫去阴云写法书!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-15 08:05:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

"心有荷花情有梦", 好美的詩句呀!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-15 20:24:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

答题:

“法书”是书法艺术中的术语,有两义:1、法度精严、可作范本的字帖;2、称赞别人艺术水平高的书法作品。

我这里不是说自己书法好,是便于押韵。就做“书法”义解吧。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-16 00:23:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

试接一笑:

扫去阴云写法书,
墨香悠然浸户枢,
不求兰亭霞光灿,
毫末青魂慰山夫。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-16 04:30:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝周兄詳釋!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-16 04:33:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

运刚好诗! 充满書香氣息.
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PostPosted: 2009-09-16 04:51:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

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毫 末 青 魂 慰 山 夫 ,
游 龍 飛 鳳 筆 中 娱 .
隶 楷 行 草 隨 心 舞 ,
歌 賦 詩 詞 咏 綠 蕪 !

( 恬淡人生何所求,自寻快樂樂优悠! 闲來揮毫泼丹青,游龍飛鳳筆中娱.隶楷行草随心舞,歌賦詩詞咏綠蕪! )
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PostPosted: 2009-09-16 15:55:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

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歌赋诗词咏绿芜,
春耕秋刈展银锄。
一分辛苦二分获,
笑我何人是弱儒。

(匆匆一过,见白云兄的倡议不错,参与一下。)
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PostPosted: 2009-09-17 05:12:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝晓松兄! 問好!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-17 09:22:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

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笑 我 何 人 是 弱 儒 ,
亦 文 亦 武 自 歡 愉 .
引 壺 浊 酒 黄 昏 後 ,
三 菜 一 湯 香 满 厨 !
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PostPosted: 2009-09-17 11:08:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

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三菜一汤香满厨,七荤八素脆鲜酥。
四朋五友他乡聚,九赋十诗赛玉珠。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-17 17:31:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

九赋十诗赛玉珠,红牙铁板舞仙姝。
清风朗月吟骚雅,绿水青山展画图。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-18 03:51:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

庆宏君妙詩,每句圴以两個数目詞對仗,趣!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-18 03:59:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

"红牙铁板舞仙姝",既漫妙,又骚雅,好句!
問好刘献琛!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-18 04:26:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

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綠 水 青 山 展 画 圖 ,
白 鷗 灰 鴨 戲 平 湖 .
一 聲 雁 叫 秋 風 送 ,
漫 野 斑 斕 七 彩 鋪 !
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PostPosted: 2009-09-18 16:03:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

闹热,再接:
漫野斑斓七彩铺,
霓光虹影下天都。
花缀凤尾飘诗意,
琴箫绵绵醉玉姑。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-18 17:20:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

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琴箫绵绵醉玉姑,
南洋野老笑相扶。
华灯初上人喧闹,
小雨无声润如酥。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-19 04:58:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

运刚很美的詩,真是花缀凤尾飘诗意,尤勝琴箫醉乎乎!
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