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【古风】早春

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Posted: 2009-09-11 04:03:21 Post subject: 【古风】早春

因写新诗，有意不学“平仄”，来点“顺口溜”，纯属娱乐。早春河堤散步冬复春，腊梅香残鸟飞鸣。蕨草冒芽早于柳，何人闭门咏柳青？ 2009年正月初三 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-09-11 04:47:13 Post subject:

歡迎周兄大驾光臨! 冬复春來鳥飛鳴,詩情画意咏柳青.暢意! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-09-12 03:50:01 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

歡迎周兄大驾光臨! 冬复春來鳥飛鳴,詩情画意咏柳青.暢意!

谢白云闲人君的读赏！问好！
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Posted: 2009-09-12 05:42:15 Post subject:

周兄,你的"詩歌是灵魂的歌唱",说得在理,说到点子,说出心声! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-09-12 15:17:36 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

周兄,你的"詩歌是灵魂的歌唱",说得在理,说到点子,说出心声!

谢谢白云闲人的深刻理解和赞同。

没有灵魂的人的当不了“诗人”的，诗歌不是唠叨、叙说、白话，是歌唱、飞翔、梦想。

拙著书名就是《灵魂的歌唱》
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Posted: 2009-09-13 01:22:43 Post subject:

“何人闭门咏柳青”耐人寻味。

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Posted: 2009-09-13 01:31:15 Post subject:

如果用“何人”，应该是问句用问号(?)更有意味。

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Posted: 2009-09-13 03:37:19 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

“何人闭门咏柳青”耐人寻味。

这句是这首存在的根据。今人写古体诗，如无“发现和新意”，人们为什么要读？不如读李白杜甫他们。问好米兄！
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Posted: 2009-09-13 03:38:46 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

如果用“何人”，应该是问句用问号(?)更有意味。

好意见，接受。遥谢啦！
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