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一只小蜜蜂呀,飞进花丛中
遛达的七七
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PostPosted: 2009-09-12 00:45:40    Post subject: 一只小蜜蜂呀,飞进花丛中 Reply with quote

永远丢着文件……在这里备份一个:



《无道道 · 蓝莓有刺》



早安,蓝莓花!我是蜜蜂本人。

胆汁、财务的台风、恐怖主义余震,

就留给肥沃上流的你们。



眼前的刺丛是不会放过其他物种的

昆虫在低压和气流中得过高分

也必在简易航空学制胜



米粒国的黑头头其实是雇佣兵

他头戴山植花,口韬共和,把大炮打进地道

粮食全毁了。妈的,我孙子家里、我孙子隔壁、



我孙子在外国的盗洞里的自留地……

——啊,超重的珍宝,天涯蓝莓处处!



资产阶级轰炸机正在返祖,他们的女人

除了皮裤衩还懂点儿冷专政

该开花的都开花吧,

老子正是P股里兜着冷兵器的洋秀才

老子正是采花酿蜜的活大善人

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PostPosted: 2009-09-12 02:37:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

异样!
标新立异!
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遛达的七七
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PostPosted: 2009-09-12 08:53:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

其实七七一般就是这么写,不是故意标新立异。不过我也知道,放在温和一些的坛子,会显得特怪

呵呵!谢谢少君来踩,十分开心能看见你~
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PostPosted: 2009-09-12 17:10:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

大开眼界 Cool

资产阶级轰炸机正在返祖,他们的女人

除了皮裤衩还懂冷专政



这两句真是入木三分。“皮裤衩”,我懂点
但不知“冷专政”是何意。是有关“女权”的么
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PostPosted: 2009-09-12 17:29:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

虽然不是很懂其中的意思。但是很喜欢这首诗

这种俏风格 Smile 读着有令人神志清醒的感觉,或如:


俏也不争春

待到山花烂漫时,一只小蜜蜂在从中笑
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PostPosted: 2009-09-12 18:31:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

跟美·国有关,跟其他爱对Ch国指手画脚的D国有关

后来写变味儿了,跟色情有关了。呵呵

谢过上城来读,中秋节好,受七七一拜~
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PostPosted: 2009-09-13 17:08:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

先顶~待回来细读。顺问77中秋愉快~:))
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PostPosted: 2009-09-13 18:28:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

上城 wrote:
大开眼界 Cool

资产阶级轰炸机正在返祖,他们的女人

除了皮裤衩还懂冷专政



这两句真是入木三分。“皮裤衩”,我懂点
但不知“冷专政”是何意。是有关“女权”的么


若读诗后,能把人纠结的脑筋,松骨松骨了一番,那也就达到了一种诗功能,管它里面写些什么,最好是莫名其妙,但觉得妙。这种以文字灵活,水灵精神来感触诗眼睛的天分,七七像是生就胡来就有的本事。这才够上写诗的条件。大部分的诗人,前途都可以算出来,七七,难说。大部分的诗人,谨守章法理论,好学生类,成不了大器,’中器’可以。

专政就是‘我说了算‘,冷就是不热情,冷专政吗,我来解的话:
你是我的,不许胡来,偶尔让你尝尝。哈!不过,这首诗写得够
糟的,糟的好。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-14 01:07:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,是有些不明白,不过,够吸引眼球的。
问好七七!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-14 19:15:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵 七小姐厉害。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-14 19:27:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有鲁迅杂文的辛辣味道
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PostPosted: 2009-09-14 22:19:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

挺尖锐的~~

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